作文题25.0分
英语

72.假定你是李华,你校英文报“外国文化”栏目拟刊登介绍美国节日风俗和中学生生活的短文。请给美国朋友彼得写信约稿,要点如下:

1).栏目介绍;2).稿件内容;3).稿件长度:约400词;4).交稿日期:9月28日前。

注意:1).词数100左右;2).可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;3).开头语已为你写好。

Dear Peter,

I’d like to ask you to write an article for our school’s English newspaper.

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正确答案及相关解析

正确答案

Dear Peter,

I’d like to ask you to write an article for our school’s English newspaper.

The “Foreign Cultures” section in our newspaper is very popular among us students. It carries articles written by foreign friends about the cultures of their home countries. Would you please write something about the culture in your part of the United States? And we would especially welcome articles about how Americans spend their holidays and festivals, and the life of American high school students. You can write anything relevant so long as it’s interesting and informative. 400 words would be fine. Could we have your article before June 28?

I’m looking forward to hearing from you.

Yours,

Li Hua

解析

本题考查低头族的话题,属于演讲稿,根据材料中提供的要点信息,可以写成三段论样式的文章。学生可联系生活常识适当发挥,合情合理即可。

考查方向

本题考查了有关如何给朋友写信请教美国风俗的相关知识点。

解题思路

这是一篇关于低头族的演讲稿。主要人称为第三人称,基本时态以一般现在时为主。

首先是问候和现象,第二段是请教的内容,最后是盼望回信。同学们基本上只要按照题目给出的要点进行发挥即可。一方面,要注意文章的结构,如 in the first place, to solve the problem, Firstly,Also,What’s more,Last but not least等可以让文章成为一个整体,更为流畅。另一方面,还要注意交际的得体性,如文章可使用when it comes to, not only... but also..., I’d like to等使句式多样、语气较为婉转。

参考词汇和短语: Firstly,Also,What’s more,Last but not least等可以让文章成为一个整体,更为流畅。when it comes to, not only... but also..., I’d like to使句式多样、语气较为婉转。

易错点

内容判断错误,这是一篇有关如何给朋友写信请教美国风俗的,不要写不沾边的东西。