作文题15.0分
英语

76.假如你是北京阳光中学的李涛,今年暑假你打算到纽约自助游,你在沙发网上找到了一位愿意免费为你提供住宿的美国人Peter,请根据下表提供的信息,给Peter 写一封信,介绍你的情况以及你的需求。

注意:

1. 词数不少于50;

2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;

3. 开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。

ear Peter,

_____________________________________________________________________

Yours,

Li Tao

正确答案及相关解析

正确答案



解析

平时在学习英语时,要多注意英语的应用和实用性,尽力把已经学到的东西和实际生活中要用英语表达地方相结合,写作时要细心,尽力避免低级错误。

【参考范文】

Dear Peter,

    I’ve learned from the Couchsurfing Web that you’d like to host the travellers from all over the world.

    I’m a boy of 17, a high school student from Beijing. Having learned English for several years, I can communicate with others in English fluently. I like travelling very much, and have visited many places and cities home and abroad so far. Photography is one of my hobbies. I wonder if you could guide me to explore New York City if you are not busy.

    I will appreciate it if you could offer me your floor or a sofa to stay for 3 days for free. By the way, could you please pick me up at the airport since I’ve never been to America before.

    I’m looking forward to hearing from you.

Yours,

Li Tao

考查方向

本题考查了英语书信的知识。

解题思路

①这是一篇应用文,要求运用所学的英语知识写一封书信。

②先用英语介绍自己的详细信息,再适当的提出自己的要求

③参考词汇及短语:at the age of , be able to do sth. communicate with sb. in English, main pastimes, meet at the airport …

易错点

把握不准时态,语态以及人称的使用。