72.假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。请根据以下四幅图的先后顺序，用英文写一篇日记，记述你暑假期间构思英语作文“My Hero/Heroine”的过程。
注意：1.词数不少于60；
日记的开头已给出，不计入总词数。
On August 21st,
正确答案
【参考范文】
On August 21st, I was working on my homework, a composition titled “My Hero/Heroine”. Iwas stuck at the very beginning, trying to figure out who my hero/heroine wouldbe. Half an hour passed,yet I still could not come up with any idea.
Attracted by the cheers from the living room, I opened the door only tofind they were watching the volleyball match of women’s final. Then I decidedto take a break and joined them. The sense of excitement and nervousness wereoverwhelming as the score was quite close between China and its opponent.
To our greatest delight, the Chinese Women’s Volleyball Team won in the endand became the champion in the Olympic Games! The moment they stood on thepodium with our national flag held in front of them, we couldn’t help feelingproud as Chinese!
Right then, I was inspired. The volleyball players had trained so hardbefore the Olympics and fought till the last minute. With no doubt, they arenot only my heroines, but the heroines of China! I rushed to my desk andstarted to write my composition.
解析
本题考查如何写自己构思作文的过程 ，根据材料中提供的要点信息，可以写成三段论样式的文章。学生可联系生活常识适当发挥，合情合理即可。
【参考范文】
On August 21st, I was working on my homework, a composition titled “My Hero/Heroine”. I was stuck at the very beginning, trying to figure out who my hero/heroine would be. Half an hour passed,yet I still could not come up with any idea.
Attracted by the cheers from the living room, I opened the door only to find they were watching the volleyball match of women’s final. Then I decided to take a break and joined them. The sense of excitement and nervousness were overwhelming as the score was quite close between China and its opponent.
To our greatest delight, the Chinese Women’s Volleyball Team won in the end and became the champion in the Olympic Games! The moment they stood on the podium with our national flag held in front of them, we couldn’t help feeling proud as Chinese!
Right then, I was inspired. The volleyball players had trained so hard before the Olympics and fought till the last minute. With no doubt, they are not only my heroines, but the heroines of China! I rushed to my desk and started to write my composition.
考查方向
解题思路
这是一篇如何写自己构思作文的过程 。主要人称为第一人称，基本时态以一般现在时为主。
首先是介绍自己正在构思作文，第二段是获得灵感的过程和内容，最后是总结出自己要写的作文主题。同学们基本上只要按照题目给出的要点进行发挥即可。一方面，要注意文章的结构，如 in the first place, to solve the problem, Firstly，Also，What’s more，Last but not least等可以让文章成为一个整体，更为流畅。另一方面，还要注意交际的得体性，如文章可使用when it comes to, not only... but also..., I’d like to等使句式多样、语气较为婉转。
参考词汇和短语： Firstly，Also，What’s more，Last but not least等可以让文章成为一个整体，更为流畅。when it comes to, not only... but also..., I’d like to使句式多样、语气较为婉转。
易错点
内容判断错误，这是一篇如何写自己构思作文的过程，不要写不沾边的东西。