作文题20.0分
英语

77.假设你是红星中学高二(1)班的学生李华。下面四幅图描述了上周五你在放学路上,撞倒一位骑车老人并实施救助的过程。请根据图片的先后顺序,写一篇英文周记。

注意: 

1.文章的开头已为你写好;

2.词数不少于60。

Last Friday _____________________________________________________________

正确答案及相关解析

正确答案



解析

       平时在学习英语时,要多注意英语的应用和实用性,尽力把已经学到的东西和实际生活中要用英语表达地方相结合,写作时要细心,尽力避免低级错误。

【参考范文】

    Last Friday, as usual I rode my bike home. But at a crossing, I accidentally knocked an old man off his bike. I hurried over and found his leg was injured. Nervous and worried, I called my mom and told her what had happened. We decided to take him to the hospital first.

    Soon after we arrived at the hospital, my mother came. The doctor gave the old man a thorough examination. To our delight and relief, there was nothing seriously wrong with him. We thanked the doctor and left.

    After that, we went back to where the bike was parked only to find it didn’t work. So I immediately found a repairman to get it fixed. Before the old man left, my mom offered him our cell phone number in case he needed to contact us. Then the old man got on his bike and we waved goodbye to each other.

    The accident made me realize that in the first place we should be careful to avoid accidents, but once they occur, we should take responsibility.

考查方向

本题考查了英语看图作文的能力。

解题思路

①这是一篇记叙文,要求运用所学的英语知识描述图片的主要内容。

②先用英语描述图片的主要内容,交代清楚事情的时间,地点及人物。

③参考词汇及短语:fall off, at an age of,  with the help of…, be grateful, be a great helper…

易错点

图片观察不仔细,把握不准主要内容,时态,语态以及人称的使用。