作文题15.0分
英语

假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你的英国朋友Jim和你都喜欢阅读,最近他在邮件中提出想与和你分享读书心得。请你给Jim回信,向他介绍你喜欢的一本励志的书籍。内容包括:

1.该书的书名;2.该书的主要内容;  3.该书对你的影响。

注意:1.词数不少于50;2.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。

Dear Jim,

                                                                      

                                                                      

Yours,

Li Hua





正确答案及相关解析

正确答案

参考答案:

Onepossible version:

DearJim,

    It’s great to hear from you. It’s really a good ideafor us to share our favorite books with each other.

 My favorite book is A Tree Grows in Brooklyn written by Betty Smith. It tells the storyof France Nolan, an adolescent girl who grows up in a poor immigrant family inBrooklyn. Her mother favors her little brother, while his father is alwaysdrunk. Life is hard for her. However, reading brings her great pleasure. Thanksto the books, she finds a way to endure poverty and loneliness, surviving allthe difficulties and challenges.

What I’ve learned from this book isthat though life is tough sometimes, as long as we’re determined to rise abovedifficult circumstances, life can be hopeful and colorful. This book encouragesme to keep optimistic about life and gives me courage to face difficulties. Itcertainly deserves to read.

Looking forward to learning aboutyour favorite book.  

Yours,

Li Hua

考查方向

本题考查了有关如何写书信的知识点。

解题思路

1.      这是一篇书信格式的文章。主要人称为第一人称,基本时态以一般现在时为主。

2.首先第一段是很高兴与对方分享度过的书籍。第二段是简单介绍自己读过得书的梗概。最后是写读书后的心得体会。同学们基本上只要列举出几个方面即可。一方面,要注意文章的结构,如开篇用:It’s great to hear from you......用高兴的色彩表明自己的意图。句中用“However,while ,as long as ”链接上下文等可以让文章成为一个整体,更为流畅。另一方面,还要注意交际的得体性,如文章可使用Looking forward to learning about your favorite  book.   使句式多样、语气较为婉转。

3.参考词汇和短语:第一段开篇点题先写It’s great to hear from you......第二段介绍书的内容: My favorite book is A Tree Grows in Brooklyn written by Betty Smith.......第三段总结心得体会:What I’ve learned from this book is that.......使用适当的连词把文章连成一个整体。

【解析】本题属于书信体裁,根据材料中提供的要点信息,可以写成三段论样式的文章。学生可联系生活适当发挥,表述连贯即可。

易错点

格式错误,这是一封书信书,文章的结构已基本给出,注意落款