作文题30.0分
英语

67.在日常生活中,我们会向父母提这样或那样的要求。当父母没有满足你的要求时,你是怎么做的?请你以“When Parents Fail to Meet Our Demands”为题, 结合自己的一次经历,用英语写一篇100~120个词的短文。要求如下:

1. 描述你的经历;

2. 谈谈你的感受。

注意:短文中,不得以任何形式透露地区、学校、同学姓名等真实信息。否则,按考试作弊行为认定。

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正确答案及相关解析

正确答案

When Parents Fail to Meet Our Demands In our daily life, we often ask our parents for something. However, there are cases where we are refused.I well remember one day,my brother showed me his newly-bought computer.Then I asked my parents to buy one for me while I already owned an old computer. Much to my surprise, they turned me down although I insisted. For days I was in low spirits. Later my parents explained that they feared the games in it might affect my study. I came to realize their good intention and cheered up.In my view, I don’t want to be a spoiled child, we should put ourselves in their shoes, for they might have good reasons for their refusal. I should be considerate instead of just satisfying my personal desire.

解析

本题考查了有关夹叙夹议文的知识点。描述经历属于记叙文体裁,谈谈感受属于议论文,根据材料中提供的要点信息,可以写成三段的夹叙夹议式的文章。学生可联系生活给出例子,理由充分就可,内容不限制。

考查方向

本题考查了有关夹叙夹议文的知识点。

解题思路

这是一篇夹叙夹议的文章。主要人称为第一人称,基本时态以一般现在时为主,讲述事例用一般过去时。首先描述你的经历,需要根据生活中具体事例说明,父母拒绝给我买新的笔记本电脑,第二段描述我的感受。失落,生气,理解。同学们基本上只要列举出一个经历即可,叙事简单明了,能够突出人物性格。一方面,要注意文章的结构,叙事和说理结合,可以让文章成为一个整体,更为流畅。另一方面,还要注意交际的得体性,客气委婉,口气不客气强硬。最后,句式多样、避免重复。参考词汇和短语:Much to my surprise, turned me down, in low spirit ,intentions,cheer up, In my view,considerate

易错点

体裁判断错误,这是一篇夹叙夹议文。