作文题12.0分
英语

第二节(20分)

假设你是红星中学高三(1)班的学生李华。你和同学们在学校观看神舟十一号载人飞船发射直播。请按照以下四幅图的先后顺序,给校刊“英语角”写一篇英文稿件,介绍当天的活动。

注意:1.词数不少于60。

      2.开头已给出,不计入总词数。

提示词:点火:ignite

Last Monday I had an unforgettableexperience. I watched the launch of Shenzhou XI manned spacecraft through TV atschool.

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正确答案及相关解析

正确答案

参考答案:

One possible version:

Last Monday I had an unforgettable experience. Iwatched the launch of Shenzhou XI manned spacecraft on TV at school.

Early in the morning, we gathered onthe playground anxiously waiting for the launch. We all looked at the bigscreen attentively. Hearing “5, 4, 3, 2, 1. Ignite! Go!”, I felt my heartbeating fast. With a mass of orange flames, the spacecraft gradually flew intospace, carrying our Chinese Dream. The moment it was announced that the launch wassuccessfully accomplished, we burst into applause. We were so thrilled that wejumped, cheering the launch.

  Later that day, we had a heated discussion about what to do to celebratethe launch. We finally reached an agreement to make a wall newspaper. When the designingwas done, we set about working on it. All of us did our bit and the wall newspaper was soon finished.

   I’ll never forget this precious moment. Themagnificent launch not only impresses us deeply but motivates us to do our bestat school so that we can also make some contributions to our country. 

解析

本题考查学生写稿件的话题,根据材料中提供的要点信息,可以写成三段论样式的文章。学生可联系生活适当发挥,表述连贯即可。

考查方向

本题考查了有关书写英文稿件的知识点。

解题思路

1.这是一篇稿件。主要人称为第一人称,基本时态以一般现在时为主。

2.首先第一段是描写你和同学们在学校观看神舟十一号载人飞船发射直播。第二段是同学们等待神舟11号发射的情景。第三段是写神舟11号发射成功之后同学们进行如何庆祝的讨论。最后是写自己的心得感受。同学们基本上只要列举出几个方面即可。一方面,要注意文章的时间结构,如先是LastMonday ,........然后是Early in the morning,..... Laterthat day,等可以让文章沿着时间顺序发展,显得流畅。

3.参考词汇和短语:第一段开头先写LastMonday I had an unforgettable experience.......第二段Early in themorning, we gathered on the playground ,.......第三段开头: Later that day, we had a heateddiscussion,.......第四段开头:I’llnever forget this precious moment..... 。

易错点

主题表达不清,文章的结构已基本给出,注意分清主次段落。