作文题30.0分
英语

67.书面表达 假如你是张华,你班要推选出一名班长,请你向班主任老师用英语写一封120个词左右的信,推荐李越。要求:以具体事例说明你的推荐理由。注意:信件中不得以任何形式透露地区、学校、同学姓名等真实信息。否则,按考试作弊行为认定。Dear Sir, 

   I’d like to recommend Li Yue as our monitor. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

                                             Yours, Zhang Hua

正确答案及相关解析

正确答案

I’d like to recommend Li Yue as our monitor. Intelligent and diligent, he is one of the top students in our class. However, the reason why I recommend him is that he is responsible and always willing to help others. The other day, while going to school, I happened to see an old lady getting across the street with difficulty. Suddenly, a familiar figure got into my sight. It was Li Yue who walked the old lady safely to the other side of the street. Small act as it was, it impressed me a lot. Heroes are not necessarily those who save the world, but those who help others around them. Too many examples can account for my recommendation. He is a born image of a qualified .monitor. I hope that you’ll take my advice into counts

解析

本题考查推荐班长这一话题,属于推荐信体裁的文章,根据材料中提供的要点信息,可以写成三段或者四短的书信样式的文章。学生可联系生活给出例子,理由充分就可,内容不限制。

考查方向

本题考查了有关如何撰写推荐信的知识点。

解题思路

这是一篇推荐信体裁的文章。主要人称为第一人称和第三人称,基本时态以一般现在时为主,讲述事例用一般过去时。首先是写信的目的,推荐班长,第二段是具体理由,需要根据生活中具体事例说明,最后是总结推荐原因,希望老师同意。同学们基本上只要列举出一两个做法即可,叙事简单明了,能够突出人物性格。一方面,要注意文章的结构,叙事和说理结合,可以让文章成为一个整体,更为流畅。另一方面,还要注意交际的得体性,客气委婉,口气不客气强硬。最后,句式多样、避免重复。参考词汇和短语:I’d like to recommend, Intelligent, diligent, one of the top students , responsible ,willing to help others

易错点

体裁判断错误,这是一篇推荐信,文章的结构已基本给出。