综合题10.0分
英语

51.短文改错

Yesterday was my father’s birthday. We made many preparation for it. Early in the morning, my mother and I set off for the department store to find gift for Father. We chose very careful, eventually a warm sweater our eye but was purchased.

To showing my love for my father, I made a birthday cake under the help of my mother. In the evening, we got together to celebrate her birthday. With candles lit, we sang happy birthday out loud and clapped, that made the room alive with the sound of cheering.

Then we take a family photo to record the happy moment. When I saw tears of joy in Father’s eye, I was filled in with a feeling of accomplishment and happiness.

正确答案及相关解析

正确答案

1)preparation改成preparations

解析

1)preparation改成preparations , make preparations for意为“为……做准备”。故preparation改成preparations。

2) find后面加a, gift是可数名词,这里泛指“一个礼物”,用不定冠词,gift是辅音音素开头的单词。故find后面加a。

3) careful改成carefully,饰动词chose用副词。故careful改成carefully。

4) but改成and,子不通顺,不好做。故but改成and。

5) showing改成show,里是不定式作目的状语。故showing改成show。

6) under改成with,with the help of意为“在……帮助下”。故under改成with。

7) her改成his,据上文“my father’s birthday”可知,这是爸爸的生日,用his。故her改成his。

8) that改成which,用非限制性定语从句,用which指代上文内容,在定语从句中作主语,that不能引导非限制性定语从句。故that改成which。

9) take改成took,篇文章主要使用一般过去时。故take改成took。

10) 去掉in ,be filled with意为“充满了”。故去掉in。

考查方向

该题考查学生准确使用英语的综合能力。

解题思路

1.通读全文,了解大意。通过济览全文,从宏观上把握文章的主旨、时态、人称,为下一步的纠错做好准备;2.逐句推敲,纠正错误。仔细阅读每个句子,同时找出并纠正错误;3.重读全文,修正答案。

易错点

代词、介词、形容词和副词的基本用法、非谓语动词、连词、动词时态语态、动词变形等。