作文题20.0分
英语

77.假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。请根据以下四幅图的先后顺序,介绍你和家人在去年9月3日观看国庆阅兵活动的过程,并以“An Unforgettable Day”为题,给校刊“英语角”写一篇英文稿。

注意:(1)词数不少于60;

(2)短文的开头已给出,不计入总词数。

提示词:阳台 balcony

朋友圈 WeChat Moments

AnUnforgettable Day

      On September 3, a military parade was heldto celebrate the 70th anniversary of the victory of World War II.

(请务必将情景作文写在答题卡指定区域内)

正确答案及相关解析

正确答案

解析

本题考查看图作文,属于记叙文,要能够准确描述每一幅图画的内容。要注意使用正确的时态和人称。

An Unforgettable Day

  On September 3, a military parade was held to celebrate the 70th anniversary of the victory of World War II. Ten minutes before the big event, we seated ourselves in front of the TV, eager to watch the live broadcast.

  Soon the parade started. Seeing the soldiers and military equipment proceed along Chang’an Street, past Tian’anmen Square, we couldn’t help cheering and applauding for our powerful country.

  Then the roaring of military aircraft overhead caught our attention. We rushed to the balcony and took photos of the planes flying in formation. What an impressive scene!

  I couldn’t wait to share my pictures and feelings with friends on WeChat Moments. To my surprise, WeChat was already flooded with numerous pictures and comments expressing love for our motherland.     What an unforgettable day!

考查方向

本题考查了如何写看图作文。

解题思路

(1)这是一篇看图作文。主要人称为第一人称,基本时态以一般过去时为主。

(2)主要内容: 根据四幅图画的顺序,列出大阅兵时“我”和家人所看、所想、所做等。

(3)参考词汇和短语: a military parade 大阅兵 anniversary 周年 broadcast 直播

Applaud can’t wait to do impressive

易错点

时态的运用。