作文题15.0分
英语

71.假设你是红星中学学生会主席李华。你从报纸上得知英国人Christopher J. A. Smith先生骑自行车从英国抵达北京,创下了新的世界纪录。请你用英文给他写一封邮件,邀请他近期到 你校做一次演讲。内容包括:1.说明邀请他的原因;2.告知演讲的相关信息(例如:时间、地点、听众等);3.询问对方能否前来。

注意:1.词数不少于50;

开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。

Dear Mr. Smith,

                                                                                                        

                                                                                                 

                                                                                                   

                                                                                                                          

Sincerely Yours,

Li Hua





开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。

正确答案及相关解析

正确答案

【参考范文】

One possible version:

Dear Mr. Smith,

I am the president of the Student Union at the Hongxing Middle School. Onbehalf of our school, I would like to congratulate you on the new world recordyou have set. Meanwhile, I am delighted to invite you to give a speech in ourschool about what you experienced because you are very popular in our schooland your stories published in the newspapers are a great source ofencouragement to many people.

The activity will be held in our school auditorium on November 17th. Itwill start from 15:30 and last for 2 hours. The audience may include all thestudents, staff and some parents. We really hope you can come to make it.

If you are interested in this, please write back to me at your earliestconvenience. I am looking forward to your reply.

Sincerely Yours,

Li Hua

解析

根据材料的要点,可将书信内容分成四段。第一段概括对方成绩表达崇敬,第二段说明缘由,第三段说明具体注意事项。最后一段询问对方能否前来并表达感激之情。本题考查 ,根据材料中提供的要点信息,可以写成三段论样式的文章。学生可联系生活常识适当发挥,合情合理即可。

【参考范文】

One possible version:

Dear Mr. Smith,

I am the president of the Student Union at the Hongxing Middle School. On behalf of our school, I would like to congratulate you on the new world record you have set. Meanwhile, I am delighted to invite you to give a speech in our school about what you experienced because you are very popular in our school and your stories published in the newspapers are a great source of encouragement to many people.

The activity will be held in our school auditorium on November 17th. It will start from 15:30 and last for 2 hours. The audience may include all the students, staff and some parents. We really hope you can come to make it.

If you are interested in this, please write back to me at your earliest convenience. I am looking forward to your reply.

Sincerely Yours,

Li Hua

考查方向

本题考查了书信的技巧和基本格式。

解题思路

本文是一篇书信,写时要注意格式,先介绍起因,赞扬对方的成绩;后表达对对方的崇敬之情,后介绍写信的目的和由来,再委婉地告知对方演讲的相关信息,最后询问对方的时间是否方便,一定要注意语气,要恭敬、得体。最后落款。 参考词汇和短语: Firstly,Also,What’s more,Last but not least等可以让文章成为一个整体,更为流畅。when it comes to, not only... but also..., I’d like to使句式多样、语气较为婉转。

易错点

内容判断错误。时态使用错误;称谓恰当使用,语气不当。