综合题10.0分
英语

72. 短文改错。只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。

The Internet consisted of millions of pages of data is the big source of information in the world . The World Wide Web is a computer network that allows computer users to have an access to information from millions of websites. It was invented in 1991 by Tim Berners-Lee, he built his first computer while he was at university. He came up to the idea of the World Wide Web in 1989 while worked in Switzerland. Berners-Lee made possible for everyone to use the Internet. He designed the first "web browser", which allowed computer users to access document from other computers. The Internet had created thousands of millionaires. Besides,Berners-Lee is not one of them. He now only works as a lecturer in Boston.

正确答案及相关解析

正确答案

The Internet consisting of millions of pages of data is the biggest source of information in the world . The World Wide Web (the web) is a computer network that allows computer users to have 去an access to information from millions of websites . It was invented in 1991 by Tim Berners-Lee, who built his first computer while he was at university. He came up with the idea of the World Wide Web in 1989 while working in Switzerland. Berners-Lee made 加it possible for everyone to use the Internet. He designed the first "web browser", which allowed computer users to access documents from other computers. The Internet have created thousands of millionaires. However,Berners-Lee is not one of them. He now only works as a lecturer in Boston.

解析

该题考查学生准确使用英语的综合能力。做题时候,学生首先需要理顺文章脉络,弄懂文章大意,其次,对照考查方向逐句分析找到错误并且准备修改。

考查方向

该题考查学生准确使用英语的综合能力。

解题思路

1、理顺文章脉络。文章大意:无数网页数据的因特网是世界上最大的信息资源。万维网允许电脑使用者从网站上获取信息的计算机网络系统。它是由蒂姆博纳斯李于1991年发明的,当时他发明计算机时还在上大学。他于1989年提出万维网这个想法,当时他还在瑞士工作。他让每个人有机会使用因特网。他首先设计了网页浏览器,能够让电脑使用者使用其他电脑上的文件夹。因特网造就了无数个百万富翁。然而,博纳斯李并不是。他现在只是波斯顿的一位学者。2、对照着考查方向逐句找错误。1)现在分词作前面名词的后置定语 2)根据句意此处the 加形容词最高级修饰世界上的信息资源。 3)动词短语固定搭配,没有冠词an 4)非限制性定语从句,用who作从句的主语。 5)动词短语固定搭配用come up with“提出” 6) 现在分词短语做时间状语,表主动。 7)it作形式宾语,真正的宾语是to use the Internet. 8)document是可数名词,要用复数。 9)没有过去动作做对比,不用过去完成时had done,改为现在完成时。 10)副词however表转折,根据句意,不是承接关系,而是转折。

易错点

代词、名词复数、形容词和副词的基本用法、非谓语动词作后置定语、动词时态语态、时间状语、定语从句关系词等。