8.文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加上一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(/)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：（1）每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。
（2）只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
I was taking a train to London's Victoria Station. I had noticed that the carriage was noise and filled with people.
Before long，a train inspector comes to check our tickets. A passenger realized he couldn't find his ticket but became quite upset. Then everyone in the carriage began searching the ticket，which was eventually found under a seat several rows from his owner. The person who found a ticket smiled with pleasure at his success.
No one in the carriage had previous spoken to or even noticed the ticketowner before. Yet they had so quickly offered the strangers their help. If we could show concern to others on need，the world would be a better place to live in.
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