72.第二节 书面表达(满分25分)
假定你是李华,暑假想去一家外贸公司兼职,已写好申请书和个人简历(resume)。给外教Mr Jenkins 写信,请她帮你修改所附材料的文字和格式(format)
注意:
1)词数100左右;
2)可以适当增加细节,已使行文连贯。
【参考范文】
Dear Mr Jenkins,
I am Li Hua, I am writing to tell you something about my plan for the coming summer vacation and I also want you to do me a favor.
In order to get some practical experience, I am planning to take a part-time job in a foreign capital company. I have already finished my job application and personal resume. But this is the first time that I have written an application and the personals resume, so I don’t even know if there are something to pay attention to. So, I’m writing you the letter , hoping you can give me some help. I will be very grateful if you can help me.
Looking forward to your reply. And I’d be really thankful.
Yours,
Li Hua
做为中学生,在课余要多阅读,根据试卷上关于作文的提示,就可以很快构思,写作时要细心,尽力避免低级错误。
1)这是一篇记叙文,要求写信给外教请其帮助修改资料。
2)先道明写信的目的,然后写请求帮助的内容,最后道谢。
3)参考词汇及短语:be willing to; summer vacation, do sb a favor, part-time job, looking forward to
把握不准时态,语态以及人称的使用。