作文题25.0分
英语

72.你校英语报请你对本校中学生双休日活动情况做一份调查,请结合表格内容,用英语写一篇100词的左右调查分析报告,并就中学生应如何过双休日发表一下你的看法。

注意:1. 词数100词左右;

2. 不要列出具体的数据,根据数据分析并得出结果;

3. 开头语已为你写好。

  According to theresult of our survey on how the students in our school spend their weekend, wecan read the data as follows.  

正确答案及相关解析

正确答案

【参考范文】

    According to the result of our survey on how the students in our school spend their weekend, we can read the data as follows.

    Few students are glued to their schoolwork any more. Instead, they prefer to surf on the internet, watch TV, go shopping rather than involve in sports games. Interest groups are available but not favorable.

    Personally, students are now freed from heavy burden but their spare time is not well arranged. They are expected to spend some time on what they learn instead of hanging out. More time should be spent on green field. Besides, more interest groups should be established for students to widen their horizon. In conclusion, students should be more scheduled with colorful and fruitful activities.

解析

考查方向

考查考生对表格中的数据进行分析,并就此发表自己的看法的能力。

解题思路

1. 这是一篇调查分析报告,应该以一般现在时为主。

2. 文章结构上可以分为两个部分,第一部分分析表格中的数据,第二部分就此发表自己的看法。

3. 参考词汇。可以使用be glued to, available but not favorable, be freed from, be well arranged, be expected to, hang out, widen their horizon, in conclusion等高级词汇和表达方式提高作文的语言档次。

易错点

1. 罗列数据,没有对数据所反映的问题进行概括。

2. 仅仅分析数据,没有发表自己的看法。