第4节 假定你是李华，你的外教Mr. Pick回国前向你推荐了American School Life网站，希望你借此提高英语水平。请你用英语给他写一封电子邮件，告诉他你的收获，要点如下：1. 表达思念；2. 上网收获；3. 表示感激。
注意：1. 词数100词左右； 2. 可适当发挥，以使行文连贯； 3. 开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。
Dear Mr. Pick,
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Yours,
Li Hua
Li Hua
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Dear Mr. Pick,
It's a fairly long time since you left our school. I miss you very much. Is everything going well?
The website you’ve recommended to me is very beneficial to my English study. It has abundant reading materials that I need most, greatly broadening my horizon. Now I has become more interested in English. Besides, I’ve made many new friends and we communicate a lot about school life, cultures, science, and so on. Now I can express myself much better than ever.
Thanks to your kindness and consideration, I’ve made rapid progress in English study. I owe all my achievements to you. I’m looking forward to more advice from you!
Yours,
本题考查如何写电子邮件的 ，根据材料中提供的要点信息，可以写成三段论样式的文章。学生可联系生活常识适当发挥，合情合理即可。
这是一篇关于如何写电子邮件的。主要人称为第一人称，基本时态以一般完成时为主。
首先是问候，第二段是自己的收获内容，最后是感谢。同学们基本上只要按照题目给出的要点进行发挥即可。一方面，要注意文章的结构，如 in the first place, to solve the problem, Firstly，Also，What’s more，Last but not least等可以让文章成为一个整体，更为流畅。另一方面，还要注意交际的得体性，如文章可使用when it comes to, not only... but also..., I’d like to等使句式多样、语气较为婉转。
参考词汇和短语： Firstly，Also，What’s more，Last but not least等可以让文章成为一个整体，更为流畅。when it comes to, not only... but also..., I’d like to使句式多样、语气较为婉转。
内容判断错误，这是一篇关于如何写电子邮件的，不要写不沾边的东西。