作文题25.0分
英语

72.现在越来越多的人成为“低头族”(phubbing). 请你针对这一现象写一篇演讲稿。要点如下: 1. 描述低头族现象2. 发表你的看法3. 提出倡议。注意: 1.词数100左右。 2. 适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。

正确答案及相关解析

正确答案

解析

本题考查低头族的话题,属于演讲稿,根据材料中提供的要点信息,可以写成三段论样式的文章。学生可联系生活常识适当发挥,合情合理即可。

Nowadays, many people are addicted to their phones. They look at their phones everywhere all the time, ignoring the people around them. In recent years, many activities have been organized to appeal to people to stop phubbing.

There is a lot of phubbing around me. My cousin likes playing with mobile phones very much. He can’t stop sending text messages, surfing the Internet, playing mobile games and even taking photos with mobile phones. However, phubbing disturbs not only our studies, but also our life. Phubbing, whether playing phone games or sending text message, particularly in class or at work, is a big waste of time. What’s more, it can lead to health problems. For instance, using a mobile phone too much can cause eyes or back and neck pain.

In my opinion, it is high time we threw away our phones and raise our heads. We should do more exercise and take part in real-life activities. Only when we use phones reasonably can we lead a happy life.

考查方向

本题考查了有关如何撰写演讲稿和低头族相关知识点。

解题思路

这是一篇关于低头族的演讲稿。主要人称为第三人称,基本时态以一般现在时为主。

首先是低头族现象,第二段是实证和弊端,最后是倡议。同学们基本上只要按照题目给出的要点进行发挥即可。一方面,要注意文章的结构,如after dinner, in the first place, to solve the problem, Firstly,Also,What’s more,Last but not least等可以让文章成为一个整体,更为流畅。另一方面,还要注意交际的得体性,如文章可使用when it comes to, not only... but also..., I’d like to等使句式多样、语气较为婉转。

参考词汇和短语:after dinner, Firstly,Also,What’s more,Last but not least等可以让文章成为一个整体,更为流畅。when it comes to, not only... but also..., I’d like to使句式多样、语气较为婉转。

易错点

内容判断错误,这是一篇关于低头族的演讲稿,不要写不沾边的东西。