作文题22.0分
英语

87.学校即将举办“读书节”,目前正广泛征集“读书节”宣传册图片。假设你是该校学生潘阳,你已找到以下三幅图片,决定给读书节组委会写一封信,推荐其中一幅,你的信须包括以下内容:1. 简单描述你想推荐的那幅图片;2. 阐述你用这幅图片宣传“读书节”的理由。

正确答案及相关解析

正确答案

Dear Sir/ Madam,

解析

本文结构紧凑,层次分明,而且使用了多种句式和结构。

运用定语从句a picture which can be used in the brochure to remind the students of the pleasure of reading.; a personal activity which needs quietness and concentration; your classmates or best friends, who turn out to have been deeply impressed as well;My ideal atmosphere of reading is just like that, through which you can not only appreciate the content by yourself, but also have the pleasure of sharing the plots or opinions with your peers, which will ultimately enhance your understanding of the book;

运用连词 Though,

运用副词 deeply 修饰impressed

运用了宾语从句discussing heatedly what they have just read;It seems that they have had a lot of fun through the discussion; Just imagine that you have read a terrific detective story; it is admitted that reading is mostly a personal activity;I sincerely hope that you will take my suggestion into consideration

此外,文章还使用了大量习语和短语,如not only …but also; as far as I’m concerned; To sum up ; share with; 等。

考查方向

考查描述图片及表达理由。

解题思路

1. 仔细阅读有关提示,弄清试题提供的所有信息,明确从以上三张图片中选择一张。2. 根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态;就本文而言应该用一般现在时态。但是在具体事例阐述的时候应使用一般过去时。3. 注意使用高级词汇和句式,增加文章亮点。

易错点

文章的要点必须全部包含,不能遗漏。体裁为一封推荐信。