作文题25.0分
英语

72.穷游目前是一种很时尚的旅游方式。它让很多经济不宽裕的人也能享受旅游的乐趣,因此它受到越来越多人的喜爱。请根据下列表格中的提示,就“穷游”这一现象用英语写一篇短文。

注意:

1)词数100左右;

2)可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。

3)参考词汇:穷游 travel on a budget; 穷游族 budget travelers

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正确答案及相关解析

正确答案

Traveling on a budget is a fashionable form of travel nowadays. It enables more poor travel lovers to enjoy traveling.

Compared with traditional travel, traveling on a budget is more convenient and the price of it is very inexpensive. That means travelers can arrange the schedule freely and enjoy the journey at a lower cost. Inviting as it seems to be, accommodation conditions are often far from satisfactory. What’s worse, people worry about budget travelers’ safety. But I still like it very much. It can provide travelers with chances to develop their problem-solving ability in unexpected situations.

Please remember that safety is the first when you go out for travel!

解析

本题属于社会性话题,属于议论文体裁,根据材料中提供的要点信息,可以写成三段论样式的文章。学生可联系生活和经验适当发挥,表述连贯即可。

考查方向

本题考查了有关如何写小议论文的知识点。

解题思路

1这是一篇议论文。主要人称最好为为第三人称,基本时态以一般现在时为主。2整篇文章分为三大部分,第一部分应该描述“穷游”这一社会现象,此部分篇幅不宜过长。第二部分是重点,主要阐述穷游的优点及缺点,篇幅应较长。在此过程中注意连词的使用,以使行文流畅,严谨。第三部分应为关于穷游的个人观点,篇幅不宜过长。3参考词汇和短语:compared with , what’s more, what’s worse, however 等可以让文章句子之间更为流畅。As far as I am concerned, In my opinion使词汇表达更加多样,增强文章的可读性。

易错点

漏掉表格中的关键信息;信息补充不全面,内容很匮乏。