81.假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有 10 处语言 错误，每句中最多有两处，每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：把缺词处加个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。 删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1）每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2）只允许修改 10 处，多者（从第 11 处起）不计分。
Women are playing a much important part in society than before. Now woman are working as teachers, scientists and even leaders. Almost all jobs that used to be done by men is done perfectly well by women. Women are no longer looked down in society. As these changes taking place in their social role, women’s position in the family has been improved as well. That’s hard to find the wife is busy doing housework while the husband is just sitting in an armchair, watches TV. In spite of all these changes, the great number of men still guard their rights and gender discrimination still exists. Few women are appointing high-ranking jobs in a company because of the existence of the glass ceiling. This is the problem we should try to solve it now.
【语篇导读】本文是一篇社会现象类说明文，谈到了女性全面参与社会生活，社会地位有了很大提升。但是仍然存在急需解决的性别歧视现象。
1. much 改成 more 或 much 后加 more 2 . woman 改成 women 3. is 改成 are4.down 后加 upon/on 5. As 改成 With 6. That’s 改成 It’s7. watches 改成 watching 8. the 改成 a 9. appointing 改成 appointed 10. 去掉 it
该题考查学生准确使用英语的综合能力。做题时候，学生首先需要理顺文章脉络，弄懂文章大意：本文是一篇社会现象类说明文，谈到了女性全面参与社会生活，社会地位有了很大提升。但是仍然存在急需解决的性别歧视现象。对照考查方向逐句分析找到错误并且准备修改。1）考查形容词比较级，根据后面than可知此处应为more。2）考查名词单复数，谓语动词是 are working，所以应为复数women。3)考查主谓一致，主语是all jobs，故应该为are。 4)考查短语搭配，look down on/upon，瞧不起。故down后应加on/upon。5) 考查句式结构，其后taking place是非谓语形式，故不可用连词as，此处应为with的复合结构。 6)考查it用法。此句需用it做形式主语。7考查非谓语动词中分词作状语。主语the husband与watch为主动关系，故改为watching。8)考查短语意义辨析。A number of，许多；the number of...的数量。根据语境应为“许多男人......”所以the改为a。9)考查动词语态，根据句意，应是公司里鲜有女性被安排做高级别的工作，应是被动，故appointing改为appointed。10)考查定语从句中关系词指代作用的掌握。the problem we should try to solve指代the problem的关系代词which或that做solve的宾语，可省略，故it应删除。
1、理顺文章脉络，搞清行文逻辑。2、对照着考查方向逐句找错误。3、重读文章，核查答案。
冠词、代词、介词、形容词和副词的基本用法、非谓语动词、连词、动词时态语态、动词变形、固定搭配等。