作文题25.0分
英语

73.第二节:书面表达(满分25分) (请在答题纸上作答,否则无效)

假设你是李华,今年将要参加高考。你想在大学里学习外语专业,但是你的老师和父母都对你的选择提出了异议,对此你很苦恼。请你根据下表提示,用英语给你的英国笔友David发一封邮件,谈谈关于你的专业选择问题,并寻求帮助。

注意:

1 词数100左右;  ②可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;

③信的开头和结尾已给出,但不计入总词数。

Dear David,

I am at a loss nowadays.

I’m looking forward to your early reply.

Yours,

Li Hua

正确答案及相关解析

正确答案

Dear David,

I am at a loss nowadays. My teacher and my parents have different opinions about choosing my major in college. My parents think I should major in finance because they feel that it will prepare me for a career in the world of business. However, my teacher says I should choose law as my major, who thinks that our society is in great need of skilled workers and experts in law and I will find a good job after graduation. Despite their opinions, I want to learn a foreign language because language is what I am interested in and good at. I know it would be a pity if I didn’t make full use of my talent for language.[来源:]

What should I do? Can you give me some useful advice?

I am looking forward to your reply.

Yours,

Li Hua

解析

本题考查低头族的话题,属于演讲稿,根据材料中提供的要点信息,可以写成三段论样式的文章。学生可联系生活常识适当发挥,合情合理即可。

考查方向

本题考查了有关如何给朋友写信请教朋友建议的相关知识点。

解题思路

这是一篇关于低头族的演讲稿。主要人称为第三人称,基本时态以一般现在时为主。

首先是问候和现象,然后是请教建议,最后是盼望回信。同学们基本上只要按照题目给出的要点进行发挥即可。一方面,要注意文章的结构,如 in the first place, to solve the problem, Firstly,Also,What’s more,Last but not least等可以让文章成为一个整体,更为流畅。另一方面,还要注意交际的得体性,如文章可使用when it comes to, not only... but also..., I’d like to等使句式多样、语气较为婉转。

参考词汇和短语: Firstly,Also,What’s more,Last but not least等可以让文章成为一个整体,更为流畅。when it comes to, not only... but also..., I’d like to使句式多样、语气较为婉转。

易错点

内容判断错误,这是一篇有关如何给朋友写信请教朋友建议的相关知识,不要写不沾边的东西。