作文题25.0分
英语

80.假定你是李华,你的美国朋友Susan想让你分享春节期间你的难忘经历。请你根据下面的提示给她写信。

内容包括:事件的主要人物和背景;事件的主要经过和结果;你的感受和体会。

注意:词数100左右;可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;开头和结尾已为你写好。

正确答案及相关解析

正确答案

解析

本题考查春节难忘经历的话题,属于书信体裁的文章,根据材料中提供的要点信息,可以写成三段论样式的文章。学生可联系生活常识适当发挥,合情合理即可。

Dear Susan,

I’d like to tell you something about my experience during the Spring Festival this year. My parents and I visited my grandparents in the countryside with many gifts on New Year's Eve.

Seeing us come back, my grandparents were so happy that they prepared a big family dinner for us. After dinner, my grandfather gave me some lucky money, and we chatted together about what had happened there. I learned great changes had taken place in their life. Many villagers had built new houses, and a park had been built recently.

My visit to my grandparents was unforgettable, because I saw the countryside become more and more beautiful and the people there become richer and richer. What about your hometown?

Looking forward to hearing from you soon.

Yours,

Li Hua

考查方向

本题考查了有关如何撰写信件和春节相关知识点。

解题思路

这是一封朋友之间介绍春节经历的信件。主要人称为第一人称,基本时态以一般过去时为主。

首先是目的,第二段是内容,最后是愿望。同学们基本上只要按照题目给出的要点进行发挥即可。一方面,要注意文章的结构,如after dinner, in the first place, to solve the problem, Firstly,Also,What’s more,Last but not least等可以让文章成为一个整体,更为流畅。另一方面,还要注意交际的得体性,如文章可使用when it comes to, not only... but also..., I’d like to等使句式多样、语气较为婉转。

参考词汇和短语:after dinner, Firstly,Also,What’s more,Last but not least等可以让文章成为一个整体,更为流畅。when it comes to, not only... but also..., I’d like to使句式多样、语气较为婉转。

易错点

内容判断错误,这是一封朋友之间介绍春节经历的信件,不要写不沾边的东西。