综合题10.0分
英语

假定英语课上老师要求两桌之间交换修改作文.请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。

文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除

或修改。增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(),并在其下面写出该加的词。删除: 把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。修改: 在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词:2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。

The American TV show The Voice is one of my most favorite amusement shows. In one hand, I can listen to different styles of music. On the other hand, I can see the singers' stories, who are so inspiring. I was so impressed by a musical boy who was from the country. If he was very young, he loved to sing while doing the farm work. After work. he learned to play guitar. He liked living on the farm, for the life was simple. The boy brought his guitar to the stage, worn a fashionable hat which made him seem so mysteriously. When the boy sing a song with his guitar, all the judge were astonished by his talent. As a result, he won the game but finally became famous throughout the country.

正确答案及相关解析

正确答案

去掉most; 

in改为on; 

who改为which;

if改为when/as/while;

play后加the/his; 

worn改为wearing; 

mysteriously改为mysterious;

sing改为sang;

judge改为judges;

but改为and.

解析

该题考查学生准确使用英语的综合能力。做题时候,学生首先需要理顺文章脉络,弄懂文章大意:美国电视节目<<声音>>是我最喜欢的娱乐节目之一。一方面,我可以听不同风格的音乐。另一方面,我可以看到歌手的故事,谁是如此鼓舞人心。一个来自乡村的音乐男孩给我留下了深刻的印象。如果他很年轻,他喜欢在做农活的同时唱歌。下班后。他学弹吉他。他喜欢住在农场,因为生活很简单。男孩把吉他带到舞台上,戴着一顶时髦的帽子,使他显得如此神秘。当男孩用吉他唱歌时,所有的评委都对他的才华感到惊讶。结果,他赢得了比赛,但最终在全国闻名。1.favorite是本身具有最高级意义的形容词,故其无最高级。2.on(the) one hand一方面3.which引导非限制性定语从句,补充说明stories.4.此处应为时间状语从句.5.乐器名词前应加定冠词.6.此处应为现在分词短语做状语,表伴随.7.seem是系动词,后接形容词做表语.8.此处时态为一般过去时.9.judge此处意为裁判评委,应用复数名词.10.根据句意所知,此处应为递进关系的并列句。

考查方向

该题考查学生准确使用英语的综合能力。

解题思路

1、理顺文章脉络。2、对照着考查方向逐句找错误。3、重读文章,核查答案。

易错点

冠词、代词、介词、形容词和副词的基本用法、非谓语动词、连词、动词时态语态、动词变形、固定搭配等。