作文题25.0分
英语

假定你是李华.在一个英文网络论坛上,你看到一个名叫Mike的中学生发帖( post )寻求帮助。请根据帖子内容、写作要点和要求回帖。

Hi, everyone,

I'm l8 years old and I'm going to a university in Beijing this autumn. My parents insist on going with me to help me with my daily life. But I think I can manage it all by myself. How can I make them change their ideas?

写作要点:1. 告诉Mike要理解父母亲。2. 给Mike提出解决问胜的具体建议。注意:1.词数100左右(不含己写好的部分);2.可以适当增加细节.以使行文连贯。

正确答案及相关解析

正确答案

Hi. Mike,

As a student of your age, I understand your situation.

Hi,Mike,

As a student of your age, I understand your situation.I think it is wise of you to go all by yourself.But you need to deal with your problem cautiously.You had better avoid hurting the feeling of your parents. Here are some of my suggestions.

As your parents, they may have many reasons to go with you.This is your first time to be far away from home for so long, and they surely have some worries and wish to see everything go well.So have a talk with them peacefully and listen patiently

And then, express your thanks for all their love and care.Persuade them you can manage everything well this time just as you did many times in the past. Remember to invite them to Beijing when you have already settled down. I am sure they will understand you and take your idea into consideration.

All the best.

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

解析

本题考查父母与孩子代沟的话题,属于书信体裁的文章,根据材料中提供的要点信息,可以写成三段论样式的文章。学生可联系生活常识适当发挥,合情合理即可。

考查方向

本题考查了有关如何撰写信件和两代人相处等相关知识点。

解题思路

这是一封李华劝并引导Mike的信件。主要人称为第一人称,时态是一般现在时。

首先是对Mike的处境表示理解,同时委婉指出Mike.第二段是对家长的处境分析以及对Mike的建议,最后是具体的建议。同学们基本上只要按照题目给出的要点进行发挥即可。一方面,要从Mike角度和家长角度分别分析,。另一方面,还要注意交际的得体性,如文章可使用I think, you had better,they may等使句式多样、语气较为婉转。

易错点

内容判断错误,这是一封李华劝并引导Mike的一封信,不要写不沾边的东西。