综合题10.0分
英语

51.短文改错

After the Spring Festival, there arises some hot topics, and lucky money is including as well. To collect opinions from the public, an online survey has made these days.

82% of the participants regard lucky money as one of the most important traditional custom, representing good wishes from the elderly to the new generation. Besides, lucky money is the more attractive part for children, it forms the good memory of our childhood.

The rest, however, think bad of it. For one thing, the amount is grown bigger and bigger, making it a heavy load. For another, it has been a good excuse to bribe (贿赂) people in the power, which is bad for building a healthy and harmonious society.

Personally speaking, lucky money is nothing wrong. Only when we know its meaning can you send our hearty wishes to the young.

正确答案及相关解析

正确答案

After the Spring Festival, there arises(arise) some hot topics, and lucky money is including(included) as well.

To collect opinions from the public, an online survey has (加been) made these days.

82% of the participants regard lucky money as one of the most important traditional custom(customs), representing good wishes from the elderly to the new generation. Besides, lucky money is the more(most) attractive part for children, it( which) forms the good memory of our childhood.

The rest, however, think bad(badly) of it. For one thing, the amount is grown(growing) bigger and bigger,

making it a heavy load. For another, it has been a good excuse to bribe (贿赂) people in the power, which is bad for building a healthy and harmonious society.

Personally speaking, lucky money is nothing wrong. Only when we know its meaning can you(we) send our hearty wishes to the young.

解析

该题考查学生准确使用英语的综合能力。做题时候,学生首先需要理顺文章脉络,弄懂文章大意,其次,对照考查方向逐句分析找到错误并且准备修改。

考查方向

该题考查学生准确使用英语的综合能力。

解题思路

1、理顺文章脉络。文章大意:春节后,出现了一些热门话题,压岁钱也包括在内。为了获取公众的意见,这些天进行了一个网上问卷调查。82%的参与者认为压岁钱作是最重要的代表着老一辈被新一辈的美好祝愿的传统习俗之一。并且,压岁钱对孩子们来说是最有吸引力的一部分,成为了我们童年时代的美好记忆。然而其余的人认为它不好。其一,压岁钱数量在越变越大,使其成为一个负担。其二,它成为贿赂当权者的借口,这对于建设一个健康无害的社会是不利的。个人认为,压岁钱并没有什么错。只有当我们知道它的意义,我们才能够把我们的衷心祝愿传递给年轻一代。2、对照着考查方向逐句找错误。1)后置主语为复数,2)压岁钱被包括在内,用被动形式3)网上调查时被进行,要用被动形式,过去完成时态被动结构为have(has) been done 4)传统习俗应用复数形式 5)不是两者之间,the后面应该用最高级形式, 6)非限定性定语从句不能用it做先行词7)修饰动词用副词8)数量增长应用主动形式,用现在分词 9)固定搭配,当权者people in power 10)根据句意前后一致,应用we。

易错点

代词、介词、形容词和副词的基本用法、非谓语动词、连词、动词时态语态、动词变形等。