综合题25.0分
英语

52.第六部分 写作 (满分25分)并把作文写在答题卷上

假如你叫李华,最近你校在为一批来自英国的学生征寻住宿家庭,你有意申请。请用英语给校长写封信,说明你申请的理由:

(1)住房宽敞,有私家车;(2)擅长英语,乐于交流;3、去年接待过英国学生。

注意:(1)词数100左右; (2)可适当增加细节以使行文连贯;3、信得开头已为你写好,不计入总词数。

正确答案及相关解析

正确答案

参考范文:

I'm writing to request a valuable chance to be one of the host families tor the British students.

Located in a beautiful and quiet neighborhood, our large fully-equipped apartment answers all their needs.Apart from the convenient public transportation, our own car can also take them to some nearby places of interest.With fluent English and an outgoing personality, I'm sure I will have no difficulty communicating with them.Above all, we hosted two British students last year, through which we've gained lots of experience.In addition, my mother's expert cooking can guarantee them a wonderful chance of tasting delicious Chinese food.

I would greatly appreciate it if I could have the chance to host them and make friends with them.Looking forward to your reply.

Yours,

Li Hua

解析

本文是一封申请信,要求结构严谨,层次分明,布局合理,文中用一些高级句子:Located in a beautiful and quiet neighborhood, our large fully-equipped apartment answers all their needs等各种句式和插入语,以及连接词等。

考查方向

本题考查了有关如何写申请信的知识点。

解题思路

(1)这是一篇书信格式的文章。主要人称为第一人称,基本时态以一般现在时为主。

(2)这封申请书信主要写申请的理由,包括三个方面:理由一,住房宽敞,有私家车;理由二,本人擅长英语,乐于交流;理由三,本人去年接待过英国学生。一方面,要注意文章的结构,可用三段式,合理布局,层次分明;另一方面,文中可以有意用一些高级词汇、从句和插入语等,为文章增加亮点。

注意:1. 词数100左右;2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;3. 开头语已经为你写好。

易错点

格式错误,这是一封书信,写作时不要逐句翻译,注意准确运用时态,语态,上下文意思连贯。