作文题25.0分
英语

目前我国中学生的健康状况越来越差,这使父母、学校和专家感到忧虑。为解决这一问题,有人建议将体育纳入高考。请按照以下要点发表你对此事的看法。

要点:

1. 反对此建议,认为不实际。原因是设置单独考试的标准很艰巨,这远远超出了在体育领域管理这样一个全国性考试的能力;

2. 学生的身体健康很重要,学校有责任培养学生的健身意识并提供足够的体育设施。

注意:

1. 词数不少于100;

2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;

3. 首句已经给出,不计入总词数。

参考词汇:1. 高考:the College Entrance Examination;

2. 体育设施:sports facilities.

正确答案及相关解析

正确答案

The fact that high school students are currently experiencing a sharp decline in health has aroused wide concern among parents, schools and experts.   To have this problem solved, some people suggest that PE be included as a subject in the College Entrance Examination.I’m against the idea because it is by no means practical. Setting up standards for the exam alone may well be a hard task. It is far beyond our ability to manage such a nationwide exam in the sports field. However, good health is an essential foundation of learning. Only when one is in good health can he guarantee efficient learning. Therefore, it is school’s responsibility to help develop their students’ awareness of the importance of keeping fit. Moreover, schools should provide sufficient sports facilities for their students to have regular exercise.

解析

本题考查环境相关的话题,属于倡议书体裁的文章,根据材料中提供的要点信息,可以写成三段论样式的文章。学生可联系生活常识提出具体做法,理由充分即可。

考查方向

本题考查了有关如何撰写议论文知识点。

解题思路

1.这是一篇议论体裁的文章。主要人称为第二人称,基本时态以一般现在时为主。

2.首先表达自己的意见,在论述中,要谈清楚原因。例证要服务于观点。

3.提出体育健康的重要性,在表达观点的过程中,可以多使用长句。Only when…….

4.参考词汇和短语:Firstly,Also,What’s more,Last but not least等可以让文章成为一个整体,更为流畅。suggest doing, had better do, it’s a good idea to do, it will help if you do…使句式多样、语气较为婉转。

易错点

体裁判断错误,这是一篇议论文,章的结构已基本给出。