作文题10.0分
英语

71.短文改错。假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。

I love camping. It's my favorite way to spent the summer vacation. My family and I went camp in the countryside in last year. It was one of the most exciting experiences I had never had. Every day we sleep in a tent and went for long walk. We cooked over a fire and the food always tasted wonderfully. For a whole week, I saw lovely mountains views and breathed fresh air. At night, I heard the gentle wind blowing in the trees, and I felt so peaceful. It didn’t cost much to camp, and I believe it's the best way to get close to nature and enjoy it beauty.

正确答案及相关解析

正确答案

I love camping. It's my favorite way to spent the summer vacation. My family and I went camp

spend camping

in the countryside last year,. It was one of the most exciting experiences I had never had.

ever

Every day we sleep in a tent and went for ∧ long walk. We cooked over a fire and the food

slept a

always tasted wonderfully. For a whole week, I saw lovely mountains views and breathed fresh

wonderful mountain

air. At night, I heard the gentle wind blowing in the trees, and I felt so peaceful. It didn’t

doesn’t

cost much to camp, and I believe it's the best way to get close to nature and enjoy it beauty.

its

解析

该题考查学生准确使用英语的综合能力。做题时候,学生首先需要理顺文章脉络,弄懂文章大意,其次,对照考查方向逐句分析找到错误并且准备修改。

考查方向

该题考查学生准确使用英语的综合能力。

解题思路

1、理顺文章脉络。文章大意:我喜欢野营。这是我过暑假的方式。去年我们全家人在乡下宿营。那是我有生以来最激动人心的经历之一。每天我们都谁在帐篷里面,并且徒步很远。用篝火做的饭味道好极了。整个星期,我都欣赏着美丽的山川风景,呼吸着新鲜空气。晚上,我可以听到微风吹过树林的声音,感到静极了。野营花不了多少钱,对于想亲近大自然欣赏美景的人而言是最佳选择。1)动词不定式2)固定搭配 3)介词4)never与ever区别 5)动词时态6)冠词7)形容词和副词区别8)名词单复数 9) 动词时态10)代词。

易错点

名词单复数、介词、形容词和副词的基本用法、非谓语动词、动词时态语态、固定搭配、从句引导词等。