38.假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每次错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(
删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。
修改：在错的词下画横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
Sunny 31st ,July
It was sunny today and I was in a good mood. Tired of studying or the noise of city life, I come to the ecology park to enjoy scenery and get relaxing in the afternoon.
While I arrived at the park, what came into its sight were the thick green trees. The air was fresh. In addition, I could clearly see a path around the pond. Lying on the grasses decorated with various flowers, I felt with ease because all that I wanted was peace inside.
Therefore, with time going by quickly, the sun was setting in the west. So I had to return back home. I would never forget such romantic experience, which was really beyond description.
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解析
本题为记叙文，可根据故事发展的线索把握时态，语态，以及进行重点短语的推断。
考查方向
解题思路
这是一篇记叙文，主要时态以过去时为主。对改错常考的易错点要熟悉，然后多加练习，做到错点心里有数，读文章细致。常见错误参考：时态的错误，语态的错误，介词的搭配，冠词的使用，主谓一致。。。
易错点
对整体时态语态连接词以及细小知识点的使用。