作文题25.0分
英语

你校英语外籍教师Emesto暑假期间准备在本地开一家西餐馆,要找若干名无酬服务员,下面是招聘启事:

WantedDo service work and act as translatorsHealthy & HelpfulContact: wfpub@gmail.com假定你叫李华,愿意应聘,请写封电子邮件,介绍自己并说明你应聘的理由.词数100左右,开头已写好,不计入总词数.

Dear Emesto,I happened to have read your advertisement and decide to apply for the job.

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 Yours

 sincerely,                                                                                                                                                              Li Hua

正确答案及相关解析

正确答案

Dear Emesto,I happened to have read your advertisement and decide to apply for the job. The following is my self-introduction.  As a high school student, having been learning English for so many years, I have a good command of it, especially spoken English. Warm-hearted and outgoing, I am always willing to help others. In addition, by taking exercise every day, I’m in good condition. Therefore, I’m convinced that I’m equal to the job.       By acting as a translator for you, unpaid as it is, not only will it enrich my life, but also be of great benefit to me in the long run. Apart from gaining the opportunity to practice my spoken English, I can accumulate some valuable job experience.   I’d appreciate it if you could take my application into consideration. Looking forward to your early reply!                                                                                          Yourssincerely,                                                                                                                              &nb

解析

1.这是一篇求职信体裁的文章.主要人称为第一人称,基本时态以一般现在时和一般将来时为主.

2.文章可以分为两个部分.第一部分做自我介绍,主要介绍自己与所应聘的工作相对性的能力.第二部分说明自己应聘的理由.这两项题目都没有给出提示,需要考生自己发挥.

3.主语求职信的语气应该自信但不失礼貌.

考查方向

本题考查了如何撰写求职信的知识点.

解题思路

1.这是一篇求职信体裁的文章.主要人称为第一人称,基本时态以一般现在时和一般将来时为主.

2.文章可以分为两个部分.第一部分做自我介绍,主要介绍自己与所应聘的工作相对性的能力.第二部分说明自己应聘的理由.这两项题目都没有给出提示,需要考生自己发挥.

3.主语求职信的语气应该自信但不失礼貌.

易错点

体裁判断错误,这是一篇倡议书,文章的结构已基本给出.