作文题25.0分
英语

87.Guided Writing

 Directions:  Write an English compositionin 120–150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.

   假设你是中华中学学生姚平,最近参加了一项研究性学习调研,课题为“父母是否以子女为荣”。通过调研你校学生及其父母,结果发现双方对此问题的看法有差异(数据如图所示)。根据图表写一份报告,在报告中,你必须:

描述调研数据;分析可能导致这一结果的原因。




正确答案及相关解析

正确答案

I am a middle schools student from Zhonghua middle school. I recently joined a survey conducted by our school on the topic “whether the parents are proud of their children or not”. And the resultf from both sides differs greatly according to our survey.

As you can see from our survey result displayed above. Eighty percent of the parents in our survey think they are proud of their children. While on the other hand, there are only sixty percent of the students in our survey think their parents are proud of them, which gives us the space to discover why there is such a difference between the parents and the sudetns.

The question is the same while the answers are totally different between them. It’s not difficult for us to conclude that the parents are proud of their children but that pride is not well received by their kids, which is obvious for the parents to improve their way to communicate with their children and show their love to their kids with a much more direct and efficient way.

解析

根据材料中提供的要点信息,正文写成一段即可。学生可联系生活,做出自己理解。

解题思路

本题属于看图作文。主要人称为第一人称,基本时态以一般现在时为主。注意使用高级词汇和句式,以增加文章的亮点。参考词汇和短语:a recent research shows us that; from their point of view; as long as you can see等可以让文章成为一个整体,更为流畅。with,if等连词以及which引导的定语从句和句式spend time doing等使句式多样、文章更加连贯。