作文题30.0分
英语

67.在班级活动中,当你的想法与大多数同学不一致时,你是坚持自己的观点并说服别人,还是尊重大多数同学的意见?请你以“When I Have a Different Opinion”为题,用英文写一篇100~120个词“短文。要求如下:1.从以上两种做法中选择一种;2.以具体事例阐述你选择的理由。

注意:短文中,不得以任何形式透露地区、学校、同学姓名等真实信息。否则,按考试作弊行为认定。

When I Have a Different Opinion

正确答案及相关解析

正确答案

【参考范文】

Possible Version 1

When I Have a Different Opinion

We may have different opinions in organizing class activities. We may have various ways to deal with such a situation. When I have a better idea, I would choose to stick to it. By doing so, I can not only share good ideas with others but also learn to express myself clearly.

Once we were discussing where to go for an outing. Most of my classmates wanted to go to a park while I had an idea of going to a nicer peace. I managed to persuade my classmates into accepting my idea. We did have a good time that day. Good opinions are worth sticking to because they can benefit us all.

Possible Version 2

When I Have a Different Opinion

We may have different opinions in organizing class activities. When I have a different opinion, I may choose to give it up and respect the opinion of the majority.

The main reason for my choice is that being brought up in a culture emphasizing collectivism, I tend to sacrifice my own interest for the group benefit. Once we were left to decide whether to have a picnic in a park or go to a museum. I would love to go to a museum, but most of my classmates wanted to go for a picnic. Without hesitation, I decided to follow them and we did have lots of fun that day. Sometimes giving up a little can mean getting more.

解析

文体为典型的浙江高考半开放式写作,同学们需要根据自己的思路,二者选其一,阐述理由及做法,注意过渡衔接、使用亮点句型。

考查方向

表明观点+阐释理由+结尾总结

解题思路

一、想法与大多数同学不一致的情况。二、选择一种做法:二者选一三、阐述

理由四、自己的做法

易错点

对文章要求理解不够准确,不能够准确的理清思路,不能无误地用语言表达。