作文题25.0分
英语

72.假如你是李华,计划和同学去敬老院(nursing home)陪老人们国重阳节(the Double Ninth Festival)。请给外教Lucy写封邮件,邀她一同前往,内容包括:1. 出发及返回时间;2. 活动:包饺子、表演节目等。

注意:1. 词数100左右;2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;3. 结语已为你写好。

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Looking forward to your reply.

Yours

Li Hua

正确答案及相关解析

正确答案

【参考范文】

Dear Lucy,

I’d like to invite you to join us for a visit to the nearby nursing home next Saturday for the Double Ninth Festival. It is the day for the elderly in our culture. We’ll go and make dumplings and cakes with the elderly people there. We’ll also spend some fun time together singing, dancing and playing games, which we hope will make them happy. We should be back around 4 o’clock in the afternoon. If you are able to come with us, please let us know and we’ll wait for you at the gate at 9 in the morning.

Looking forward to your reply.

Yours

Li Hua

解析

根据材料中提供的要点信息,正文写成一段即可。学生可联系生活,做出自己理解。

考查方向

本题考查了有关书信写作格式的知识点。

解题思路

1.这是封邮件。主要人称为第一人称,基本时态以一般将来时为主。2.本篇书面表达属于英文书信,根据提示信息说明邀请Lucy去参加的活动和时间等。写作时注意以下几点:(1)仔细阅读有关提示,弄清试题提供的所有信息,明确三个要点:邀请、时间、具体活动。(2)提纲是文章的总体框架,要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思和想象。要依据提示情景或词语,按照一定逻辑关系来写。本文写作时可以按照要点所给的顺序写。3.注意使用高级词汇和句式,以增加文章的亮点。参考词汇和短语:I’d like to,invite you to join us ,for a visit to,be back around,be able to,come with us,wait for等可以让文章成为一个整体,更为流畅。with,if等连词以及which引导的定语从句和句式spend time doing等使句式多样、文章更加连贯。

易错点

没有注意到题目的要求,这是一封邮件,邮件的格式已基本给出。