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Recently there had been many reports about teenagers’ safety, in which some of them got hurt and even lost their lives. Besides, it’s necessary for our teenagers to develop self-protection awareness and learn to protect ourselves. But how can we protect ourselves? First of all, we should make a rule to eat healthy food, in case unhealthy food does harm for our health. Second, we should be careful when made friends, especially online. Third, for the sake of our safety and the others’ safety, we should obey the traffic rules. Last but not least, if we are in dangers, we should call the police immediate. All in all, we must keep safety in mind, no matter when and where we are.
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had 改为have；and 改为or；Besides改为Thus /Therefore; our改为us；make 与a 中间加it; for 改为to；made改为making; 去掉the others’的the；dangers改为danger , immediate 改为 immediately
解析
句意为：近来，这儿有许多关于青少年孩子们安全的报道。根据本句中后半句中的非限定性定语从句的意义来看 ，此处应为选择语意而不应该是并列语意因为上句讲的是原因，所以下一句语意应该是结果，故用Thus /Therefore，our teenagers是修饰限定关系，此处 us teenagers应该是我们青少年的同位关系。根据make it n. to do sth.的形式宾语常见结构和此处的语意来看，make a rule to eat healthy food ，其中make 与a rule 少了指代不定式的it来做形式宾语。do harm to 为固定搭配。when made friends的逻辑状语应该是主句中的we,故省略结构中的made应该改成making。根据句意，此处不应该是特指，应该是泛指。此处in danger 为固定结构。形容词不能作状语修饰动词call，故用副词immediately。
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解题思路
据本文的主体行文时态一般现在时及recently所表达的意义常常与现在完时态连用，可知本句应用现在完成时态根据本句的语意来说，our teenagers是修饰限定关系，此处 us teenagers应该是我们青少年的同位关系。根据make it n. to do sth.的形式宾语常见结构和此处的语意来看，make a rule to eat healthy food ，其中make 与a rule 少了指代不定式的it来做形式宾语。do harm to 为固定搭配。when made friends的逻辑状语应该是主句中的we,故省略结构中的made应该改成making。根据句意，此处不应该是特指，应该是泛指。此处in danger 为固定结构。形容词不能作状语修饰动词call，故用副词immediately。
易错点
recently常见时态的正确应用，连词词义的辨析，混淆行文的逻辑关系，混淆行文的逻辑关系，it做形式宾语的正确使用和常见形式宾语结构搭配的积累，固定搭配记错，逻辑主语混淆或不清楚。冠词的误用，名词单复数的误用。形容词与副词的混淆