51. 假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。 2.只允许修改10处，多者不计分。Annie Oakley became famous as her ability to shoot a gun and hitting very small objects. There are hundred of stories about her. However, much of the stories aren’t true. She was a performer in a traveling Wild West show. She used her skill at shooting a gun to become one of most famous sharpshooters in American history. She decided to help with her family earn money when she was 8. She taught herself what to shoot her grandfather’s gun and began hunting animals for money. By the time she was 15, she has made enough money to pay for her family’s farm. Soon his ability to shoot a gun became wide known in her town.
as改成for ； hitting 改成hit；hundred 改成hundreds。much改成many。第三行most famous前加the。第四行help后的with去掉。第五行what改为how。第六行has改为had。第六行his改为her。第七行wide改为widely。
本题考查固定短语become famous for sth.的用法。根据题干分析Annie Oakley因为她的射击能力而出名，所以as改成for。本题考查have ability to do sth.的用法。根据题干分析，her ability to shoot a gun and hitting very small objects, 这里shoot和hit是并列的，都要用动词原形，所以hitting改成hit。本题考查hundreds of 固定短语的用法。根据题干分析，There are hundred of stories about her.有数以百计关于她的故事，这里要用hundreds of的固定短语，所以hundred 改成hundreds。本题考查“许多”的复数形式表达方法。根据题干分析， of the stories aren’t true，因为story是复数，所以要用many而不是修饰不可数名词的much，所以much改成many。本题考查help sb. Do sth的用法。根据题干分析She decided to help with her family earn money可知她决定帮家里人挣钱，固定短语help sb. Do sth.，所以help后的with去掉。本题考查how to do sth.的用法。根据题干分析She taught herself what to shoot her grandfather’s gun她自学怎么去使用她祖父的枪，这里用的是方式，所以把what改为how。本题考查过去完成时的用法。根据题干分析By the time she was 15, she has made enough money to pay for her family’s farm.到她15岁的时候，她就已经挣够了为她家人买一个农场的钱，挣到钱have made money发生在过去的过去，尤其是看到由by引导的时间状语从句更要考虑过去完成时，所以固定短语help sb. Do sth.，所以has改为had。本题考查主语she的形容词性无主代词的用法。根据题干分析“Soon his ability to shoot a gun became wide known in her town.”不久她的射击能力全镇都知道了，因为全文的主人公是she，所以把his改为her。本题考查副词修饰形容词的用法。根据题干分析“Soon his ability to shoot a gun became wide known in her town.”不久她的射击能力全镇都知道了，因为wide是用来修饰动词know的，副词才能修饰动词，所以把wide改为widely。
本题考查固定短语become famous for sth.的用法。根据题干分析Annie Oakley因为她的射击能力而出名，所以as改成for。本题考查have ability to do sth.的用法。根据题干分析，her ability to shoot a gun and hitting very small objects, 这里shoot和hit是并列的，都要用动词原形，所以hitting改成hit。本题考查hundreds of 固定短语的用法。根据题干分析，There are hundred of stories about her.有数以百计关于她的故事，这里要用hundreds of的固定短语，所以hundred 改成hundreds。本题考查“许多”的复数形式表达方法。根据题干分析， of the stories aren’t true，因为story是复数，所以要用many而不是修饰不可数名词的much，所以much改成many。本题考查形容词的最高级前加定冠词的用法。根据题干分析she...become one of the most famous sharpshooters,可知此处是famous的最高级形式，所以在most famous前加the。本题考查过去完成时的用法。根据题干分析By the time she was 15, she has made enough money to pay for her family’s farm.到她15岁的时候，她就已经挣够了为她家人买一个农场的钱，挣到钱have made money发生在过去的过去，尤其是看到由by引导的时间状语从句更要考虑过去完成时，所以固定短语help sb. Do sth.，所以has改为had。本题考查主语she的形容词性无主代词的用法。根据题干分析“Soon his ability to shoot a gun became wide known in her town.”不久她的射击能力全镇都知道了，因为全文的主人公是she，所以把his改为her。本题考查副词修饰形容词的用法。根据题干分析“Soon his ability to shoot a gun became wide known in her town.”不久她的射击能力全镇都知道了，因为wide是用来修饰动词know的，副词才能修饰动词，所以把wide改为widely。
固定短语become famous for sth.的用法错误。have ability to do sth.的用法错误。hundreds of 固定短语的用法错误。“许多”的复数形式表达方法错误。形容词的最高级前加定冠词的用法错误。help sb. Do sth的用法错误。how to do sth.的用法错误。过去完成时的用法错误。主语she的形容词性无主代词的用法错误。副词修饰形容词的用法错误。