作文题25.0分
英语

52.假如你是李华,在你校学习的美国交换生David和你成为了好朋友,并且在他的帮助下你的英语学习取得了很大的进步。在他结束学习回国之后, 请用英语给他写一封感谢信。内容应包括:

1 表达思念;2 感谢帮助;3 希望保持联系。

注意事项:

1 不得透露真实姓名和学校 

2 词数:100左右 

3 .开头和结尾已写出,不计入词数

Dear David ,

How time flies! It’s been a total week since you left our school.  ________________________

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Yours

Lihua

正确答案及相关解析

正确答案

Dear David ,

How time flies! It’s been a total week since you left our school. Thank you so much for your help. How I wish you could stay here a little longer!

On writing this letter, precious memories rush into my mind. I still remember when you first came into our classroom smiling and showed us your wonderful Street Dance, which, as well as your native accent, attracted us all. What leaves me the deepest impression is the way you helped me memorize English words. You always repeated the words for many times before I could learn them all by heart. With your help, I have made much progress in my English, which finally ranks the top 10 in my class. Thank you so much again!

I really hope we can stay in touch forever!

Yours

Lihua

解析

本题考查表达谢意的话题,属于书信体裁,根据材料中提供的要点信息,可以写成三段论样式的文章。学生可联系生活适当发挥,表述连贯即可。

考查方向

本题考查了有关如何写感谢信的知识点。

解题思路

这是一篇书信格式的文章。主要人称为第一人称,基本时态以一般现在时为主。

首先是表达感谢,第二段是回忆以前他帮助你的情景,最后是提出保持联系。同学们基本上只要列举出几个情景即可。一方面,要注意文章的结构,如On writing this letter, when,before,with your help等可以让文章成为一个整体,更为流畅。另一方面,还要注意交际的得体性,如文章可使用How I wish… which as well as your native accent, I still remember when…使句式多样、语气较为婉转。

参考词汇和短语:On writing this letter, when,before,with your help等可以让文章成为一个整体,更为流畅。How I wish… which as well as your native accent, I still remember when使句式多样、语气较为婉转。

易错点

格式错误,这是一封书信书,文章的结构已基本给出, 注意落款。