作文题25.0分
英语

72.假如你是李华,你的好友王明自进入高三以来一直觉得压力很大,学习状态不大好。 请你给他写封电子邮件,以帮助他振作起来。

写作要点:1.给他一些建议;2.送上祝福。注意:1. 词数 100 左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。

正确答案及相关解析

正确答案

Dear Wang Ming,

I am sorry to hear about your situation. But I hope youwill soon cheer up. The following are some suggestions for you to relievestress.

First,try to build up your confidence. Preparing for the college entranceexaminations is a long-term and complicated process and confidence plays animportant role in it. So never give  up orlose heart no matter what happens. Second, you should find out your own strengthsand

weaknesses inyour study, and seek help from both teachers and classmates in face ofdifficulties and stress. Last but not the least, you are supposed to do morephysical exercise so as to keep fit as well as relax yourselves. Alwaysremember “All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy”.

Less pressure,better life! Best wishes to you!

YoursLi Hua

解析

本题考查高三学习压力大的话题,属于书信体裁的文章,根据材料中提供的要点信息,可以写成三段论样式的文章。学生可联系生活常识适当发挥,合情合理即可。

书面表达:Dear Wang Ming,

I am sorry to hear about your situation. But I hope you will soon cheer up. The following are some suggestions for you to relieve stress.

First, try to build up your confidence. Preparing for the college entrance examinations is a long-term and complicated process and confidence plays an important role in it. So never give up or lose heart no matter what happens. Second, you should find out your own strengths and

weaknesses in your study, and seek help from both teachers and classmates in face of difficulties and stress. Last but not the least, you are supposed to do more physical exercise so as to keep fit as well as relax yourselves. Always remember “All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy”.

Less pressure, better life! Best wishes to you!

Yours Li Hua

考查方向

本题考查信件,主题是高三压力大,提些建议。

解题思路

这是一封关于高三压力大学习状态不佳提些建议的的稿件。主要人称为第二人称,基本时态以一般现在时为主。

首先是目的,第二段是建议,最后是祝福。同学们基本上只要按照题目给出的要点进行发挥即可。一方面,要注意文章的结构,如 in the first place, to solve the problem, Firstly,Also,What’s more,Last but not least等可以让文章成为一个整体,更为流畅。另一方面,还要注意交际的得体性,如文章可使用when it comes to, not only... but also..., I’d like to等使句式多样、语气较为婉转。

参考词汇和短语:flock into,  Firstly,Also,What’s more,Last but not least等可以让文章成为一个整体,更为流畅。when it comes to, not only... but also..., I’d like to使句式多样、语气较为婉转。

易错点

内容判断错误,这是一封关于高三压力大学习状态不佳,提些建议的稿件,不要写不沾边的东西。