作文题25.0分
英语

52.近年来,华北的一些城市频繁出现雾霾(smog)天气,引起了人们对空气质量的广泛关注。假如你是李华,你的美国笔友David对目前中国出现的雾霾天气也很关注,来信向你询向此事。请你给他写封回信。

    要点如下:

    1、感谢他的关注;

    2、简述雾霾天气给人们的身体和生活带来的不便和危害;

    3、谈谈你的感想。

    注意:1、词数100左右;

         2、可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;

         3、开头和结尾已为你写好,不计人总词数。

Dear David

                                                                                 

                                                                                

                                                                              

                                                                              

                                                                               

                                                               Yours,

                                                               Li Hua

正确答案及相关解析

正确答案

DearDavid

I’m glad to receive your letter. I’ve learnt that you areconcerned about the smog which frequently strikes some cities and areas ofChina. Thanks for your concern. I’m also very worried about such terribleweather because it has brought much inconvenience or rather harm to people’shealth such as traffic jam, road accidents, bad coughs and even lung cancersand so on.

As is known to all, good environment comes from carefulprotection. So we should do what we can to protect it. I believe a small stepcan make a difference. Try to drive less and choose air-friendly products. Onlywhen everyone has the environmental awareness can we have a blue sky.

Looking forward to hearing from you and share your goodideas.

考查方向

本题考查了有关如何撰写演讲稿和低头族相关知识点。

解题思路

 这是一篇关于中国雾霾的书信。主要人称为第一人称,基本时态以一般现在时为主。

首先是感谢笔友对中国雾霾天气的关心,第二段是介绍中国雾霾天气的现状及造成的种种不便。同学们基本上只要按照题目给出的要点进行发挥即可。一方面,要注意文章的结构,如be concerned about, Thanksfor, , as is known to all等可以让文章成为一个整体,更为流畅。另一方面,还要注意交际的得体性,如文章可使用Looking forward to,only加状语置于句首部分倒装等使句式多样、语气较为婉转。

    参考词汇和短语:be concerned about, Thanks for,, as is known to all等可以让文章成为一个整体,更为流畅。Looking forwardto,only加状语置于句首部分倒装等使句式多样、语气较为婉转。

【解析】本题考查雾霾的话题,属于书信,根据材料中提供的要点信息,可以写成三段论样式的文章。学生可联系生活常识适当发挥,合情合理即可。

易错点

内容判断错误,这是一篇关于中国雾霾的书信,不要写跑题。