作文题20.0分
英语

72.某中学生英文报近期开辟专栏,讨论学习习惯问题,请你结合自身学习实际,按以下提示,用英文为该专栏写一篇稿件。1、说明学习习惯与学习效果之间的关系; 2、介绍一种好的学习习惯并提出养成该习惯的建议; 3、描述自己在学习习惯方面存在的某个问题并给出改进措施。注意: 1、词数120左右,开头语已为你写好; 2、可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯; 3、文中不得透露个人姓名和学校名称。

It's useful and necessary to discuss learning habits.

正确答案及相关解析

正确答案

A

解析

1在进行写作时,要明确得分点,应细心分析,弄清内容要点,既要避免漏点,又要限制任意发挥;正确表达,符合英语语言习惯。考生应扬长避短,在不改变原文基本内容的前提下,灵活地运用最熟悉最有把握和词汇和句式。此外,考生应尽量使用一些髙级词汇和复杂句式,以提高文章得分等级。2.参考词汇和短语:  Good habits contribute to better learning results, Making full use of time is a good habit, waste much time doing nothing还运用了定语从句which requires one to plan carefully.等。并注意了句子的衔接如:so ,For example, Above all等。

It’s useful and necessary to discuss learning habits. In reality, different students have different learning habits, which I think influence their learning efficiency greatly. Good habits always lead to high efficiency, while bad ones bring the opposite.

Some students are good at concentrating on what the teachers teach in class. They think only in this way can they understand and memorize the teaching materials better.  If we find those materials interesting, we’ll focus our attention on them for long. However, those dull lessons require our determination, self-controlling ability and confidence.

My classmates always call me “Mr. Forgetful”, because I can not memorize those I have learnt. I

know that it is because I don’t spend some time in memorizing the没 after class. My teachers advise me to repeat the materials several times and read them aloud, which they think will help improve my memory.

考查方向

半开放式提纲作文的应用文写作

解题思路

1 本篇书面表达属于提纲式作文,提纲类书面表达不是简单的逐条翻译,而是将所给的几个要点合理地组成比较通顺的短文,因此要仔细组织语言,合理安棑结构。这篇作文要求较灵活,比如自己好的学习习惯应是能够提高学习效果的,不好的学习习惯会阻碍学习的。

2本人主要是第一人称,一般现在时为主

3写作要点包括: 1.说明学习习惯与学习效果之间的关系;介绍一种好的学习习惯;3.养成该好习惯的建议; 4.描述自己在学习习惯方面存在的某个问题5改进措施;

易错点

在此类应用文写作中,应该注意做到围绕要点灵活的表达,要求在写作时要注意该文体的写作结构,并准确用词,保持句式多样化等方面有调高的要求。