综合题10.0分
英语

51.假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。作文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加:在缺词处加一个漏子符号(∧)并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。

With the development of people’s living condition, more and more people possess their own cars. Some of us think it is good to own a car. For instance, it’s convenient, fast and comfortable means of transportation. Moreover, it shows that people are becoming richer and the country is much more stronger. It also made relative businesses and industries develop faster.

   However, others have different opinions, thinking that cars give up waste gases and pollute the environment around. Too much cars will have some bad effects, such as more accidents and crowdedness. Besides, lack parking lots is another big problem.

   As far as I’m concerned, we ought to think careful before buying cars. As if we have cars, we may use it less.

正确答案及相关解析

正确答案

1. 第一句: condition →conditions; 

解析

文章大意: 随着人们生活水平的提高, 越来越多的人拥有私家车。针对这一现象,一些人支持,一些人反对, 各自给出了观点, 最后,作者表明了自己的观点------买车前要三思而行。

1.在表示(居住,工作或事情的)环境时,condition 需用复数形式。

2. a means of 为固定搭配, 意为: “......的一种方式” 。

3. strong的比较级为stronger, more 重复, 故删去。

4.全文时态是一般现在时为主, 应改为一般现在时, 且主语是It, 故改为makes。

5. give up 放弃; give off 发出, 释放; 句意: ……汽车排放废气,污染周围环境。

6. many 修饰可数名词; much 修饰不可数名词; 汽车可数, 故改为many。

7.本句缺主语, 故用其动名词形式。

8.本句中需用副词carefully修饰动词think。

9. even if 即使; as if 似乎,好像。

10.根据上文的cars可知,此处为复数形式。

考查方向

本题考查学生对英语知识的掌握和语言综合运用能力。

解题思路

本题考查学生在语篇中准确运用英语知识的能力, 常从词法、句法和行文逻辑这三个角度设问。首先, 应从语篇入手,理解文章大意。第二, 在理解大意的基础上, 审查句子结构; 第三, 从语法结构, 进行语法改错; 最后, 通读全文,以检查改错过程中是否有因上下文制约疏忽导致的误改。

易错点

名词单复数、动词时态、词与词之间的搭配、词性转换、冠词、连词、代词、非谓语动词等。