作文题25.0分
英语

81.请阅读下面文字及图表,并按照要求用英语写一篇 150 词左右的文章.  第五部分: 书面表达

[写作内容]1. 用约 30 个单词概述上述信息的主要内容;2. 结合上述信息,简要分析导致交通问题的主要原因;3. 根据你的分析,从社会规范(rules and regulations)和个人行为两方面谈谈你得到的启示(不少于两点)。

[写作要求]1. 写作过程中不能直接引用原文语句; 2. 作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称;3. 不必写标题。

[评分标准]

内容完整,语言规范,语篇连贯,词数适当。

正确答案及相关解析

正确答案

参考范文:One possible version

The traffic issue is a hard nut to crack. It not only affects our everyday life, but may also threaten people's lives. The three selections presented above are typical examples.

Quite a few things give rise to the traffic problem. In spite of the large-scale construction of roads and highways, there is still much room for improvement, because of the ever increasing number of cars these years. What's worse, some drivers, cyclists and pedestrians do not think it vital to obey traffic rules.www.2abc8.com

In fact, traffic rules are part of the rules and regulations closely related to public order. Without them, people could not enjoy harmony or the country would be in chaos. But rules alone don't secure an orderly society. It is the people who obey the rules that matter. It is everybody's duty to observe them to keep our society in order and going on the right track.

解析

文章就交通问题进行了讨论,应该使用一般现在时态,第三人称。至少两个要点:人们不遵守交通规则;私家车数量增加对交通的影响。参考词汇:not only…but also…,without , it is…that…, affect.

考查方向

议论文

解题思路

第一段文字的信息给出了话题“交通问题影响了人们的生活”第二段文字和第三段分别给出了造成问题的原因。

易错点

要点不全,时态错位,文章脱节,单词拼写错误,句式错误。