作文题25.0分
英语

72.假定你是李华,你的好朋友Judy因考试发挥失常,导致成绩不理想而情绪低落。请你给他写封信表示安慰,要点如下:

1) 对她目前状况表示理解;

2) 建议她找出失常的原因并吸取教训;

3) 鼓励她树立信心,争取下次考出好成绩。

注意:

1) 词数100左右;

2) 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;

3) 开头已给出,不计入总词数。

Dear Judy,

I’m sorry to hear that you didn’t do well in your exam and

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Yours,

Li Hua

正确答案及相关解析

正确答案

Dear Judy,

I’m sorry to hear that you didn’t do well in your exam and that you are depressed and worried about your study. I quite understand how you feel now. As your friend, I have some tips for you.

First of all, I want to say failure is the mother of success. So never give up though you failed this time. You should try to analyze the cause and draw a lesson from it. This can help you make up for the shorts of knowledge and skills in those areas. The next is to build up confidence. For it is the deciding factor to ideal grade.

I am sure by doing this your test results will be improved next time and gradually your confidence will also come back.

Yours,

Li Hua

解析

本题考查劝慰提建议的话题,属于书信体裁,根据材料中提供的要点信息,可以写成三段论样式的文章。学生可联系生活适当发挥,表述连贯即可。

考查方向

本题考查了有关如何写书信的知识点。

解题思路

这是一篇书信格式的文章。主要人称为第一人称,基本时态以一般现在时为主。

首先是对她的现状表示理解,第二段是帮她找原因,最后是提出期待。同学们基本上只要列举出几个情景即可。一方面,要注意文章的结构,如first of all, the next等可以让文章成为一个整体,更为流畅。另一方面,还要注意交际的得体性,如文章可使用failure is the mother of success, analyze the cause, draw a lesson, the shorts of knowledge, to build up confidence使句式多样、语气较为婉转。

参考词汇和短语:first of all, the next等可以让文章成为一个整体,更为流畅。failure is the mother of success, analyze the cause, draw a lesson, the shorts of knowledge, to build up confidence使句式多样、语气较为婉转。

易错点

格式错误,这是一封书信书,文章的结构已基本给出, 注意落款。