作文题25.0分
英语

81.假设你是李华,请你以自己网上购书所遇到的不愉快经历,向中国某家英文报纸生活栏目写一封抱怨信。要点如下: 1. 所购书中有破损、缺页现象; 2. 一些书籍价格比实体书店还要贵;注意: 1. 词数100左右; 2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯; 3. 开头语和结尾已给出(不计入总词数)。

正确答案及相关解析

正确答案

解析

本题考查网购的话题,属于书信体裁的文章,根据材料中提供的要点信息,可以写成三段论样式的文章。学生可联系生活常识适当发挥,合情合理即可。

Dear Sir or Madame,

I am a middle school student. I am writing to express my dissatisfaction and disappointment about the unpleasant experience when I bought some books from the Internet the other day.

The reason for my dissatisfaction and disappointment is that the books I bought online were beyond my expectation. In the first place, they were poorly printed. In addition, some books are slightly damaged and even some pages are missing. Needless to say, the price of some books is even higher than that in our local Xinhua Bookstores.

To solve these problems, I am writing this letter to you, hoping that my letter will arouse the attention of the public through this media. I am fully confident that they will improve their service with the supervision of the public opinion.

I would be grateful if you could take my opinion into consideration.

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

考查方向

本题考查了有关如何撰写抱怨信和网购经历的知识点。

解题思路

这是一封抱怨网购图书弊端的信件。主要人称为第一人称,基本时态以一般现在时、一般过去时为主。

首先是目的,第二段是抱怨信内容,最后是愿望。同学们基本上只要按照题目给出的要点进行发挥即可。一方面,要注意文章的结构,如the reason for, in the first place, to solve the problem, Firstly,Also,What’s more,Last but not least等可以让文章成为一个整体,更为流畅。另一方面,还要注意交际的得体性,如文章可使用when it comes to, not only... but also..., I’d like to等使句式多样、语气较为婉转。

参考词汇和短语:Firstly,Also,What’s more,Last but not least等可以让文章成为一个整体,更为流畅。when it comes to, not only... but also..., I’d like to使句式多样、语气较为婉转。

易错点

内容判断错误,这是一封抱怨网购图书弊端的信件,不要写不沾边的东西。