作文题25.0分
英语

72.书面表达(满分25分)

假定你是李华,你所在的新华中学今年将举行80周年校庆。请给你的笔友Rose写一封信介绍你的学校,信的具体内容包括:

1)地理环境; 2)社会影响力; 3)教育特色。

注意: 1)词数100左右,信的开头和格式已为你写好。

2)可根据内容要点适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。

正确答案及相关解析

正确答案

Today I’d like tointroduce to you my school, Xinhua High School. Located at the bank of theJialing River, it is one of the best key schools in Chongqing. Hailed as thefertile soil for talents and cradle of academicians’, where enormous numbers ofcelebrities have been fostered and immense contributions have been made to theChina’s rise to the world power, Xinhua enjoys tremendous prominence both athome and abroad.

 The reason why my school is so successful liesin many aspects. First, not only various compulsory courses of high quality areoffered, but also a wide range of fabulous optional courses are available,singnificantly helping develop students’ special talents and interests. Second,you can find scores of student clubs and interest groups on campus. Dynamicteenagers can been seen everywhere engaging in all sorts of after-schoolactivities. We believe not only are academic achievements important but alsoall-round abilities matter. Besides, with International Department founded inrecent years, more and more international-oriented students spring up year byyear.

All in all, Xinhua isa school where whole-person education is practiced and where students strive tomake a difference in all walks of life. Hopefully, you can come to visit itnext month, when it will mark its 80th anniversary this year.

考查方向

本题考查了写书信的知识点。

解题思路

1.      这是一篇书信的文章。主要人称为第一人称,基本时态以一般现在时为主。

2.      首先是讲述地理环境,第二段介绍社会影响力,最后是说出教育特色。同学们基本上把问题条理理顺,问题说清楚即可。一方面,要注意文章的结构,如first, second,besides, all in all, 等可以让文章成为一个整体,更为流畅。另一方面,还要注意交际的得体性,如文章可使用locate at, hail as,more and more使句式多样、语气较为婉转。

3.      参考词汇和短语:first, second,besides, all in all,等可以让文章成为一个整体,更为流畅。locate at, hail as,more and more使句式多样、语气较为婉转。

易错点

对书信的格式不清楚,条理不清晰。