作文题25.0分
英语

假如你是济南一中的李华,今年即将高中毕业。请根据以下要点给某英文报写一篇英语短文,谈谈你对高三生活的看法。

(1)对获得的帮助表示感谢;

(2)消除与同学之间的误会;

(3)努力学习,实现人生梦想;

(4)对学弟、学妹的建议。

注意:(1)可适当加入细节,以使行文连贯;(2)词数:100左右(开头已给出,不计入总词数)。

High school is regarded as the best time in a person’s life.As a senior 3 student,it won’t take long before I graduate.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

正确答案及相关解析

正确答案

High school is regarded as the best time in a person's life. As a senior three student, it won't take long before I graduate. Now, I have much to share with my fellow students.

Firstly, I would like to show my appreciation to those standing by me all the way, teachers, parents and friends included. Without their help and advice, my life would be different.

Secondly, it's high time to say sorry to classmates whom I hurt or misunderstood. Communication and smiles act as bridges to friendship. Above all, I've made up my mind to make every effort to study, for I believe hard work is the key to success. Just as the old saying goes, "no pains, no gains."

Finally I hope that all the younger fellows can make full use of time, because time and tide wait for no men.

解析

根据材料中提供的要点信息,可以写成三段论样式的文章。学生可联系生活,做出自己理解。

考查方向

本题考查了有关如何撰写议论文的知识点。

解题思路

1.这是一篇议论看法文的文章。主要人称为第二人称,基本时态以一般现在时为主。

2.在写要点时要各有侧重。分为四层来写,作为主体部分,要语言简洁,巧妙运用些句型,长句,如:I would like to show my appreciation to;Without one’s help and advice; it's high time to; act as; make up my mind to do; 使文章大气,流畅。

3.参考词汇和短语:Firstly,Also,What’s more,Last but not least等可以让文章成为一个整体,更为流畅。suggest doing, had better do, it’s a good idea to do, it will help if you do…使句式多样、语气较为婉转。

易错点

体裁判断错误,这是一篇议论看法文,文章的结构已基本给出。