作文题25.0分
英语

47.每年都有许多人外出旅游,一些人的不文明行为引起了社会的广泛关注。某英文报社正在举行以“文明旅游”为主题的讨论。假定你是李华,请你给报社写一封信,呼吁大家做文明游客。要点如下:

1)尊重习俗;  2)不高声喧哗;   3)其他

注意:1)词数100左右;

2)可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;

3)开头和结尾语已为你写好,不计入词总数。

Dear Editor,

I’ve read your discussions on how to behave properly while traveling.

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Yours truly

Li Hua

正确答案及相关解析

正确答案

参考范文Dear Editor,

I’ve read your discussion on how to behave properly while traveling. Every year, a great many holidaymakers go out for sightseeing and relaxation. While they are enjoying themselves, some of them behave rudely, which causes a big concern. How to be a civilized tourist has become a heated topic.

In my opinion, it is necessary to watch our manners. First, we must respect and follow local customs. Besides, we’d better not talk loudly in public places to avoid disturbance to others. Also, be aware that queue jumping is unacceptable in many countries. More importantly, if we travel abroad, we should bear in mind that we are representing our country, so we need to be cautious about how we act. Only in this way can we enjoy our trips and have beautiful memories as well.

Yours truly

Li Hua

解析

本题考查表达建议的话题,属于书信体裁,根据材料中提供的要点信息,学生可联系生活适当发挥,表述连贯即可。

考查方向

本题考查了有关如何写建议信的知识点。

解题思路

这是一篇书信格式的文章。主要人称为第一人称,基本时态以一般现在时为主。

首先要描述现象,说明影响,其次要表达自己的观点。用上一些连接词,如,first,besides,also,so,more importantly.自己的观点建议要明确清晰。

参考词汇和短语:respect and follow local customs;avoid disturbance;in my opinion

易错点

格式错误,这是一封书信书,文章的结构已基本给出, 注意落款。