56. 作文 写作一(满分15分)
请就以下话题,按要求用英文写作。
If you could give your younger self one piece of advice, what would you say?
要求:
1)作出回答并说出理由;
2)词数不少于60;
3)在答题卡上做答。
Were I three years younger than I am now, I would strongly recommend that I set more practical and specific goals. As an old saying goes, living without a clear and achievable aim is like sailing without a compass. Compared with many abstract objectives, practical ones can bring us more courage and confidence whenever we make one step forward. If only I could go back and reset my goals.
“如果你可以给年轻的自己一条建议,你会说什么?”这是一篇建议型的短文,同学们可以从结构和主题两方面考虑。结构上主要考查同学们提出建议以及陈述理由的语句,再加衔接自然,条理清晰;主题上也就是建议的具体内容,同学们可以灵活构思,比如:建议年轻的自己更加珍惜时间、学会感恩、设定具体的学习目标等,只要同学们能够顺利翻译的相关主题都可以。
开头部分建议句式:主要考虑从虚拟语气着手
中间部分原因句式:建议陈述两个原因,用并列结构not only, but…as well连接
结尾部分:表达对“回不到过去”的惋惜
对句子意思理解不够准确,不能够准确的理清思路,不能无误的是用语言表达。