作文题25.0分
英语

82.假如你是高三学生李小华,请针对游客在旅游胜地乱刻名字的现象,给某英语报刊写一封信。信

的内容包括:

1)该现象的危害;

2)造成此现象的原因和解决办法;

3)请报社向公众发出呼吁。

注意:1)词数:100 字左右。文章开头和结尾已给出,  不计入总词数。

2)内容可适当发挥,注意行文连贯。

3)参考词汇:刻字:    carve / inscribe

Dear editor,

I am Li Xiaohua, a senior student from a high school in Chengdu.

                                                                                       

                                                                                          

                                                                                          

Best wishes, Yours sincerely, Li Xiaohua

正确答案及相关解析

正确答案

【参考范文】

I am Li Xiaohua, a senior student from a high school in Chengdu. I’m writing to you for a phenomenon that I'm concerned about.

Nowadays, no matter which tourist attraction we visit, we can always see some people’s names inscribed in walls or trees. Obviously, these words don’t go well with the surroundings. Not only do they damage the ancient buildings but also ruin the beauty of our natural environment.

The reason for this behavior is probably that some people lack the awareness of protecting our cultural heritage. Therefore, I strongly suggest that strict rules be passed to discipline these tourists’ behavior and they be fined for the damage.

I would appreciate it if your newspaper could appeal to the public to behave themselves and leave nothing but footprints while traveling.

Best wishes,

解析

本题考查针对社会现象进行公益呼吁的话题,属于书信体裁,根据材料中提供的要点信息,最好写成四段样式的文章。学生可联系生活适当发挥,做到表述连贯,能做到简单句表达句式多样化,复合句、高级词汇、语义衔接词频现,就会是一篇佳作。

考查方向

本题考查了书信类应用文。

解题思路

这是一篇书信格式的文章。主要人称为第一人称,基本时态应以一般现在时为主。

建议大家写四段。首先第一段写信目的。第二段是指出现象以及该现象的危害。第三段写造成此现象的原因和解决办法。第四段请报社向公众发出呼吁。

同学们只要根据提示列出要点,适当发挥即可。一方面,要注意文章的结构,如 I’m writing to you for a phenomenon ...,Nowadays,Therefore等可以让文章成为一个整体,更为流畅。另一方面,还要注意交际的得体性,如文章结尾可使用I would appreciate it if 句式,语气较为委婉。

参考词汇和短语:phenomenon ;Obviously;be concerned about;names inscribed in walls or trees;go well with the surroundings;ruin the beauty of ...;lack the awareness of...;cultural heritage;discipline these tourists’ behavior;appeal to the public to behave themselves。

易错点

这是一封书信书,文章的结构、书信格式已给出。注意审题立意,注意字数,不要过度发挥。