作文题25.0分
英语

43.    近年来,城市的公园都免费向公众开放,给人们的生活带来了便利,同时也带来了一些问题。假如你是李华,请根据以下要点给报社的社会专栏写一封信,谈谈你的看法。

1.免费开放公园的好处。

2.由此带来的问题。

注意:

1.词数100左右。 

2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。  

3.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。

4.文章中不得出现与本城市有关的地名。

正确答案及相关解析

正确答案

Dear editor,

I’ve learnt that city parks offer free admission nowadays. People have the opportunity to go outside and relax free of charge. Meanwhile, fresh air and landscapes in parks are good for our health.

However, too many people flocking into parks might not be so good for the parks. For example, some visitors leave their garbage behind, which may cause environmental pollution. And people’s barbeques will also bring damage to the grassland in parks.

As a student, I’m in favor of free admission to parks. It makes people like the poor and students go to parks frequently as well. On the other hand, visitors should be informed to protect the environment while enjoying the beauty of the nature.

Yours,

Li Hua

解析

本题考查公园免费开放利弊的话题,属于书信体裁的文章,根据材料中提供的要点信息,可以写成三段论样式的文章。学生可联系生活常识适当发挥,合情合理即可。

考查方向

本题考查信件,主题是公园免费开放的利弊。

解题思路

这是一封关于公园免费开放利弊的稿件。主要人称为第一人称,基本时态以一般现在时为主。

首先是目的,第二段是内容,最后是愿望。同学们基本上只要按照题目给出的要点进行发挥即可。一方面,要注意文章的结构,如 in the first place, to solve the problem, Firstly,Also,What’s more,Last but not least等可以让文章成为一个整体,更为流畅。另一方面,还要注意交际的得体性,如文章可使用when it comes to, not only... but also..., I’d like to等使句式多样、语气较为婉转。

参考词汇和短语:flock into, Firstly,Also,What’s more,Last but not least等可以让文章成为一个整体,更为流畅。when it comes to, not only... but also..., I’d like to使句式多样、语气较为婉转。

易错点

内容判断错误,这是一封关于公园免费开放利弊的稿件,不要写不沾边的东西。