作文题30.0分
英语

77.作文

假定你是李华。在校报英语专栏看到了学校“英语文化节”的一则招募启事,请阅读启事,并根据写作要点写作要求写一封应征邮件。

Volunteers Wanted

Our annual English Festival, which will be held on June 15-17, 2015, is now looking for 20 student volunteers to provide service for Talent Show, Speech Contest, and English Debate. If you are interested, please send an application email at your earliest convenience to Ms.Chen at chenlaoshi@aef.com.

写作要点:

1)表示写信意图;

2)陈述应征目的;

3)说明应征条件(性格、能力等)。

写作要求:

1)邮件词数不少于100;

2)开头和结尾部分已写好,不计入总词数;

3)可根据情况增加细节,使行文连贯

4)不能使用真实姓名和学校名称。

正确答案及相关解析

正确答案

I’m Li Hua, a student from Class2, Grade 3. I’m writing to apply for the position as a student volunteer.

   I really want to obtain this precious opportunity because, by offering my service, I will be able to improve my organizational ability, communication skills as well as my confidence in speaking English in public.

  As an outgoing girl, I get along well with my classmates. Besides, I have such a good command of English that I am elected as assistant to my English teacher. Successfully, I have lent a helping hand to her in several English activities of my class, which have been appreciated by both teachers and classmates.

   I am sure that I can perfectly live up to your expectations. I will be gratefull if you could give me a kind consideration.

  Looking forward to your reply.

Yours truly,

     Li Hua

解析

做为中学生,在课余要多阅读,再根据试卷上关于作文的提示,就可以很快构思,写作时要细心,尽力避免低级错误。

考查方向

本题考查了用英语表达的能力。

解题思路

1)这是一篇记叙文,要求根据招募启事写一封应征邮件。2)先表明写作意图,陈述应征目的,说明应征条件,最后表明决心。3)参考词汇及短语:apply for, opportunity, in public, outgoing, get along well with, good command of

易错点

把握不准时态,语态以及人称的使用。